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Gnarled

the floor smashes into her wrist twisting the limb she didn't see the floor, wet aged 100 her mobility is stress heavy like being priced out of a home her fall of unexpected angles with balance of nature, near gone sometimes a mis-fire between mind and body her living in strange places, sometimes a drift of confusion poking out from my mother's cast purple fingers swollen Cuban cigar fat gnarled in a body that pushes her down like a heavy window slammed shut she sees each short walk as a victory when resistance is a national anthem when the puzzle of gnarled still allows a place to breath still allows a way to seek higher ground

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Date: 12/30/2023 5:47:00 PM
Brian, your poignant words depict a poignant reality. Your portrayal of resilience amidst struggle is deeply moving. The imagery of gnarled fingers captures the weight she bears. Yet, within her trials, you beautifully emphasize her victories and determination to seek higher ground. - Blessing, Daniel
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Date: 12/30/2023 5:54:00 PM
Greetings Daniel, I appreciate your most positive assessment of my poem. My mother is remarkable in her fight to push through adversity. Thank you for your insights. Best wishes. Brian
Date: 12/30/2023 12:37:00 PM
This is a tragic tribute to a mother from a son who wishes to free her from her withering body. Yet, it also speaks to anyone who has been forced to confront the fragility and decline of old age. Very superbly conveyed! :-) Thomas
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Date: 12/30/2023 5:20:00 PM
Many thanks, Thomas, for your favourable response to my posting. My mother carries on despite such chronic pain throughout her body. Her wrist remains mis-aligned and quite sore. I hope that you are well. Your recent postings have been exceptional. With appreciation. Brian
Date: 11/28/2023 4:43:00 PM
A century is a long line of good, sweet memories. Mothers are always remembered for all time. :) My late congratulations Sir Brian! Cliff
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 11/28/2023 9:00:00 PM
Hello Clifford, My appreciation for your congratulatory message. My mother is something of a wonder woman indeed - feisty but durable in spirit. Be well. Brian
Date: 10/31/2023 11:03:00 AM
wow, she is one strong woman. I think mine will be the same. Already she is coming up on age 92. Awsome tribute, Brian.
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Date: 10/31/2023 2:23:00 PM
Hi Andrea, thanks very much for your stop by and affirmative message. Longevity seems to have blessed our mothers. I wish mine wasn't so hobbled by chronic pain. Be well. Thanks again. Brian
Date: 10/23/2023 8:05:00 AM
I admire your mother, Brian. 100 yrs is no joke, and she still does not throw in the towel, in spite of a broken limb. Reminds me of my mother, though she was 6 yrs younger than yours when she had her accident. ** Regards // paul
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 10/23/2023 8:12:00 AM
Hello Paul, Thank you for the stop by and message. Yes, my mother's will to carry on is remarkable. We soon celebrate her 101st birthday. Look after yourself. With appreciation, Brian
Date: 10/19/2023 8:36:00 AM
I can truly understand this one except for the broken limb (that has not happened to me so far and I call that a blessing). I enjoyed reading your modern style of poetry this morning. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 10/19/2023 9:55:00 AM
Thanks very much, Sara, for your drop by + affirmative comment. My mother is quite remarkable in her ability to carry on despite the infimities of aging. Look after yourself. Sincerely, Brian
Date: 10/19/2023 2:12:00 AM
Well done for your win. I'm not in contests these days following my hospitalization. Lost some muse. Oh well, life is like that. Nut I just want to say sorry about your mother. She will be in my prayers. Blessings.
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Date: 10/19/2023 5:40:00 AM
Hello Victor, thank you for your message + thoughtful concern. My mother's broken wrist has certainly set her back. We assist her daily. I hope that you are on the mend. All the best, Brian
Date: 10/14/2023 2:13:00 AM
Very well-written, Brian. I hope your mother is feeling better, my friend. 100- wow! God bless her...Congrats on your win in Constance's contest! A toast and a few puffs on a Cuban to you and mom! Charlie
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 10/14/2023 8:30:00 AM
Thank you, Charles, for your drop by + congratulatory message. My mother has a tremendous will to live though the quality of her life is poor. Take care of yourself. With appreciation for your encouraging words, Brian
Date: 10/13/2023 11:20:00 AM
Brian, congratulations on your win. Your imagery is always so innovative and wonderfully descriptive - "purple fingers...Cuban cigar fat." And yet, through all of your mother's pain her indominable spirit rises - "resistance is a national anthem." How perfectly spoken. Thank you for this poignant and powerful poem. Blessings to both of you. Cheers!
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Date: 10/13/2023 2:37:00 PM
Greetings Sam, I hope all is well with you. I appreciate your thoughtful comments on my posting. My mother's broken wrist was reset today - quite painful for her. She has 4 more weeks in the new cast. But she pushes on. Sincerest regards always, Brian
Date: 10/9/2023 9:19:00 PM
Brian, I do not know how to email you directly, so I am commenting on your poem. Thank you, sincerely, for your kind words and encouragement. I am blown away and feel honored...to be recognized by such a prolific and gifted poet such as yourself. Thank you again, Michael Thomas Huch
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Date: 10/10/2023 6:52:00 AM
Hello Michael, Thank you for your appraisal of my postings though many are not to the liking of contest sponsors. You are an original, new voice on this site + we welcome + celebrate your poetic excellence. Take care + let your pen flow. Be well. Brian
Date: 10/8/2023 11:24:00 PM
Brian, excellent poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, I love your layout, Constance
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Date: 10/9/2023 6:06:00 AM
Greetings Constance, Thank you for the recognition of my poem. I am in the nursing home frequently assisting my mother who struggles with the cast on her arm. She fights on. With appreciation for your acknowledgement. Be well. Brian
Date: 10/6/2023 8:36:00 PM
Kudos to your mom for living 100 years and still want to move around some. Nice poem, Brian. Have a pleasant weekend, my friend. Bill
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Date: 10/7/2023 5:29:00 AM
Hello Bill. Yes my mother carries on + nears now, her 101st birthday even though she is much encumbered by ailments. Thank you for your note. All the best, Brian
Date: 10/5/2023 10:35:00 AM
Congratulations on a win!
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Date: 10/5/2023 11:21:00 AM
Thanks very much for your stop by + congratulatory message. All the best, Brian
Date: 10/3/2023 10:06:00 AM
Danger lurks at old age, the fall is the worst calamity, I am glad she still can move a little at 100 years of age. Nice poem and glorious win.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 10/3/2023 2:05:00 PM
Hi Jay, Yes, my mother is a trooper, a "bomb girl" during WW2 making armaments for soldiers. Now she struggles through pain to keep moving. Sad. This latest fall + fracture a terrible set back. Thank you for the drop by + note. Be well. Brian
Date: 10/2/2023 6:12:00 PM
Yikes! Dangerous…
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 10/2/2023 6:13:00 PM
Hi Kim, Yes, my dear mother is in a world of dangerous living. Wishing you wellness, Brian

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