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“Be a virgin your first time in bed once you’ve married,” my dear mother said. “But why do I see a picture of me from the day, Mama dear, YOU were wed?”

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Date: 9/12/2024 1:44:00 AM
Brilliant, well worded, congratulations.
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Date: 9/10/2024 7:43:00 AM
Wonderfully worded... congrats! Xo
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Date: 9/9/2024 4:17:00 PM
Very good limerick, Andrea. You nailed THE METER. Congrats! Janice
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Date: 9/9/2024 3:42:00 PM
Back to say congratulations on your win!
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Date: 9/1/2024 1:08:00 PM
Wow you nailed it! Good one! Best wishes for the contest!
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Date: 8/31/2024 3:55:00 PM
Good one. I enjoyed reading this one today. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest or I guess it must be a contest because I saw another one very similar. Thaks for sharing it with us. Sara K
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Date: 8/31/2024 10:06:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun/cute Limerick write. "Good Luck"  Looks like we both did this one. Have a fun weekend writing away....................
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Date: 8/27/2024 5:59:00 PM
Do as I say, not as I do…is the old adage…hana
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Date: 8/27/2024 3:53:00 PM
Witty, clever and fun!
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Date: 8/27/2024 7:08:00 AM
Dear Andrea, I so loved your poem and I think you may have a real winner. Good Luck on the Contest and thanks for giving me a smile. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 8/26/2024 5:34:00 PM
What a clever poem. Let’s out all the family secrets! Well done!!
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Date: 8/26/2024 1:54:00 PM
This pictrures ideaology admirably..C'ept for the Boat...Yes Andrea you forgot to put it in..! Oh I See.' Well if wouldn't float?? Anyway i reckon Your wrote a g o a t..' here.)
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Date: 8/26/2024 1:54:00 PM
This pictrures ideaology admirably..C'ept for the Boat...Yes Andrea you forgot to put it in..! Oh I See.' Well if wouldn't float?? Anyway i reckon Your wrote a g o a t..' here.)
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Date: 8/26/2024 11:04:00 AM
great interpretation of the image lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/26/2024 8:27:00 AM
Lol, love your interpretation of the pic Andrea, best of luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 8/26/2024 8:01:00 AM
Ironic parenting at it's best!!! Wit yet wisdom extolled, AD. :o))
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