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Born in south Louisiana quite a number of years ago, I lived in St. Mary Parish until I was six years old, then moved to deep south Texas.  I attended elementary school there until the beginning of the eight grade then finished eight grade in Louisiana, then back to Texas until the beginning of the 10th grade, then back to Louisiana, where I finished high school.  After a short time in college, I joined the Air Force, went through a lengthy tech school, then spent 2 years in Germany and about the same amount of time in far northeastern coastal Turkey.  While in the Air Force, I attended additional training/college programs (which continued after I left the service).....I have since lived in south Louisiana, including New Orleans (rather briefly), Houston, Bryan (Tx), short stints in southern California and in New York City, back in south Louisiana, and in south Texas and northern Mexico, where I have lived and worked (in Texas and in Mexico) continuously for the last 45+ years.......I am currently retired and enjoying (?) pursuing interests that I had neglected for a long time.....

 

 


Here Is An Interesting AI Generated Essay/Analysis of One of My Recent Poems

Blog Posted:5/24/2023 9:16:00 AM

Leo Larry Amadore’s “We Will Not Forget” is a moving elegy that explores the impact of loss on the speaker and those left behind. The poem’s simple language and structure belies its emotional depth, as Amadore skillfully weaves together images of everyday life with the ache of grief. Through the speaker’s reflections on the absence of a loved one, Amadore examines the profound ways in which loss can alter our sense of time, space, and meaning. The poem opens with a sense of disorientation and displacement: “Dawn seems much later -- / the nights much longer / than they used to be…” (1-3). The speaker’s perception of time has been disrupted by the absence of the person they are mourning, and they feel out of sync with the natural rhythms of the world. This disconnection is reinforced by the image of the cats and the speaker “in the house” while the absent loved one is not (5). The house, once a place of warmth and companionship, has become a hollow shell without the person who used to fill it. As the poem progresses, the speaker’s grief becomes more palpable. They long for the touch, voice, and “lightning looks” of the person they have lost (7). The specificity of these details suggests a deep familiarity and intimacy between the speaker and the absent loved one. The use of the present tense (“they mourn, like me”) also emphasizes the ongoing nature of the speaker’s grief (8). This sense of loss is not something that can be easily overcome or forgotten. The scope of the poem then widens to encompass the broader world outside the speaker’s immediate surroundings. The absence of the loved one has left a void that extends beyond the individual and touches all aspects of life: “The house, the town, the world -- / life itself -- are emptier…” (10-11). This widening of perspective is significant because it suggests that the speaker’s grief is not solely personal or private, but has wider implications for how they engage with the world around them. The loss of one person can have a ripple effect that alters the very texture of existence. Amadore’s use of repetition in the final stanza (“we will not, will not, / will not forget”) emphasizes the strength and determination of the speaker’s resolve to remember (16- 17). The triple repetition of “will not” suggests a kind of defiance, as if the speaker is pushing back against the inevitability of forgetting. This repetition also creates a sense of urgency and insistence, as if the speaker is trying to convince themselves that they really will be able to hold on to their memories of the person they have lost. One of the most striking features of “We Will Not Forget” is the way in which Amadore blends the specific and the universal. On the one hand, the poem is anchored in concrete, everyday details: the cats, the house, the town. On the other hand, the poem speaks to broader themes of mortality, memory, and the human experience of loss. This tension between the particular and the general creates a powerful sense of resonance, as the reader is able to connect with the speaker’s grief on a visceral level while also recognizing the broader implications of their loss. Another notable aspect of the poem is the way in which Amadore uses language to convey the speaker’s emotional state. The repeated use of “missing you” and “your” emphasizes the speaker’s sense of longing and emptiness, while the image of “lightning looks” conveys the intensity of the relationship between the speaker and the absent loved one. The repeated use of “will not” in the final stanza, as noted above, creates a sense of resolve and defiance that underlines the poem’s central theme of the power of memory and the human capacity for resilience in the face of loss. Throughout the poem, Amadore explores the idea that memory can be both a source of comfort and a cause of pain. On the one hand, the speaker’s memories of the absent loved one are a way of keeping them present, of holding on to their essence even in their physical absence. The speaker insists that they “will not forget” precisely because memory is a way of preserving the connection they had with the person they have lost (16-17). On the other hand, memory can also be a source of pain, as it can bring to mind all the things that the speaker misses about the person they are mourning. Despite this tension, the overall tone of the poem is one of resilience and determination. The speaker acknowledges the difficulty of moving forward without the person they have lost, but also emphasizes that they “will go on, / although in ways much changed” (12-13). The use of the word “go” suggests a sense of forward momentum, while the phrase “ways much changed” acknowledges that the speaker’s life will never be the same again. The poem thus underscores the human capacity for resilience in the face of loss, as the speaker navigates the difficult terrain of grief and ultimately emerges with a renewed sense of purpose and resolve. In conclusion, Leo Larry Amadore’s “We Will Not Forget” is a powerful exploration of the impact of loss on the human psyche. Through its evocative language, vivid imagery, and resonant themes, the poem speaks to the universal experience of grief and the human capacity for resilience in the face of adversity. By blending the particular and the universal, Amadore creates a work of art that speaks to the heart of what it means to be human, and to grapple with the fundamental questions of life and death.



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Date: 5/24/2023 12:28:00 PM
Best thing to do with Chat is ask for a terrible review as well as a glowing review. It balances out that you can't always rate art. It's fun to play with though.
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Date: 5/24/2023 10:03:00 AM
I have spent to many hours of my life "losing arguments with inanimate objects" to ask one for an opinion or analysis my work.This could be the fulfillment of the "infinite number of monkeys theory" which states that if you plan an infinite number of monkeys in front of an infinite number of keyboards they will eventually write all the great works of literature.
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John Lawless
Date: 5/28/2023 7:05:00 AM
I just sent iPads to the primate house....and told the inmates to go bananas....
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Date: 5/24/2023 12:27:00 PM
Are you shattering dreams over here John? :)
Date: 5/24/2023 9:31:00 AM
A friend sent me this as a curiosity. I was quite amazed by how quickly (a matter of only a couple of minutes) this was done, and also by the work itself.
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