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Losing You Again

They tell me: clean all the closets -- give away clothes, things you'll never use-- toss it all, decorate anew -- but, must I part with what you touched -- what you gave life by using, by cleaning, by valuing? What to me had no intrinsic worth you made precious, and now these are not mere objects: the trinkets, utensils, furniture, clothes, pictures, car, house -- machines, implements, tools, books -- all the trappings of our lives. Discarding them will be another step erasing you. Putting an end. And of my losing you -- again.

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Date: 2/4/2024 5:52:00 PM
wonderfully written lovely poem I adore your work. blessings
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Date: 4/21/2023 1:45:00 PM
Beautiful sentiments, well done on poem of the day
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Date: 4/19/2023 11:48:00 PM
Yes, it’s difficult to accept and give away the small objects that were once used by the spouse ~ well written, Leo, warmest congratulations on POTD
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Date: 4/19/2023 10:30:00 PM
Yes it is difficult. A lovely tribute. Congratulations on your POTD.
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Date: 4/19/2023 6:36:00 PM
This is beautiful, tender and emotional, all at the same time. Material things can never replace an individual, but memories live on. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. Congratulations Leo, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 4/19/2023 2:28:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD Leo. I watched my mom go through this. It's so sad
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Date: 4/19/2023 2:10:00 PM
This is a beautiful and touching poem, Leo: I know that many have faced this predicament and one could never rush to part with precious memories held within her things. I know one lady who had a special quilt made with all her hubby’s favorite Aloha shirts and she had it on her bed to always feel close to his memory. Congratulatiions. on POTD, SuZ
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Date: 4/19/2023 1:40:00 PM
This is so beautiful. I just love it so! Amazing writing - A fave. Congratulations. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 4/19/2023 1:16:00 PM
This is so poignant and sad but so beautifully written. Clothing and objects take on new meanings. I feel your pain and upset through your heartfelt words Leo. Poetry of the highest order. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 4/19/2023 1:10:00 PM
A powerful poem! Congratulations for POTD :)
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Date: 4/19/2023 10:51:00 AM
Beautifully moving, Leo. Congrats on POTD.
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Date: 4/19/2023 10:21:00 AM
Leo, congratulations on POTD. ~ Warren
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Date: 4/19/2023 10:03:00 AM
So sad to read this Leo, one thing that can never be erased is the beauty of the memories you and your love made.Take things slowly one step at a time, love lasts forever and that’s a long, long time. Congratulations on receiving the award for poem of the day… Belle
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Date: 4/19/2023 8:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. So Sorry. A powerful write. It is hard. Take one day at a time. Have a blessed day.............
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Date: 4/19/2023 7:48:00 AM
A grieving heart caught between such hard choices, A touching verse, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 4/19/2023 7:34:00 AM
Beautiful love poem and POTD, a tribute to your wife, Leo. She made the things left behind meaningful to you to comfort you in your grief, my friend. Love on, Bill
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Date: 4/19/2023 7:00:00 AM
This is so lovely and deeply moving, Leo! Congratulations on the well-deserved title POTD! Janice
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Date: 4/19/2023 6:38:00 AM
Honestly, this is the most touching poem. Even as a kid my mom says this a lot. One thing I’ve learned is the more you have, The more memories you keep. If it has a smell, a touch, a feeling behind it, focus on that energy. See what your intuition says.
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Date: 4/19/2023 6:24:00 AM
Apt and heartfelt verse eo. Congratulations on POTD. :)
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Date: 4/19/2023 5:42:00 AM
Excellent Leo, sums up the contradictions of "moving on" and "letting go"
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Date: 4/19/2023 5:31:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, beautiful poem of love for one another,
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Date: 4/19/2023 5:16:00 AM
So glad that you got the POTD as I predicted Leo. Your poem is beautiful.
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Date: 4/19/2023 5:12:00 AM
A heartfelt poem - You are right - how can we part with all the objects which were meaningful to our loved one! Be strong, Dear Poet, memories are precious, and ever-lasting! Congratulations on your POTD.
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Date: 4/19/2023 2:01:00 AM
Hi Leo, there can be no sadder moment than losing one's partner, ones loved one, even a very close friend, or, a parent, but a partner of a lifetime of memories is disastrous. I pray God gives you the strength to make the right decision for yourself, but I would not know what to advise you, stay strong and maybe give some things away but not the ones which bring intense emotion, keep those. Give yourself time to think Leo. Blessings, Jennifer. Congratulations on being honored with POTD.
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Date: 4/19/2023 1:51:00 AM
- A deeply touching poem, Leo - I understand your feelings...but, the best memories are in your heart - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs
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