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Inspired by some instagram trolls that keeps trolling.. reason im no longer active there. I had fun trying this cute form. 

scrolling trolling clicking tricking to cheat deceit snitches glitches lame game for fame peeving thieving maybe they’ll see jester fester traitor baiter drama mama dressed in satin green grime cold crime loner moaner

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Date: 11/21/2023 8:38:00 PM
Great set of footles. You are a master of all forms ! Continue your victorious journey, dear friend !
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Date: 11/12/2023 2:52:00 PM
Ink, wonderful and creative footles and congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, blessings
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Date: 11/12/2023 1:13:00 PM
Ugh, the pangs of it all, Ink Empress. There's been a rash of Medicare 2024 sales pitching being batted about that forced me to update my iPhone to automize them to my voicemail that cause their immediate hangup. Sneaky gremlins prepetually create new phone numbers instantaneously as this new alert system automize their numbers to block & phishing making it null & void. Well, my friend, complimentaries naturally extends your way 'Hawaiian Style'. Aloha, William
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Date: 11/9/2023 11:26:00 AM
Ink, these are perfect, so clever if this doesn't shame, I don't know what will. You are so good at these! Great job, did you put this in Brians contest...he created it. Brian Strand, UK Experimental Verse Footles.
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Date: 11/9/2023 1:49:00 AM
Plenty of rhymes and comparisons. Blessings.
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Date: 11/8/2023 7:44:00 PM
You did this form so well..such a master weaver you are...
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Date: 11/8/2023 6:45:00 PM
Ah, this is clever, Ink! Enjoyed!
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Date: 11/8/2023 4:49:00 PM
A fun read my Footle writing poet friend. Thanks for adding some light reading to my day. Great Footles! Ink. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 11/8/2023 12:54:00 PM
You did the story teller way with your footles. That's a hard way to do them too. I love reading footles. You did super!
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Date: 11/8/2023 12:27:00 PM
Interesting poem form, I'm not familiar with it but it is quite fun. It's not easy to take positives out of negatives but you've turned bad experience around and produced something exciting, something now to put in your toolbox and use to your advantage
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Date: 11/8/2023 8:52:00 PM
Thank you so much for such a beautiful comment , truly grateful always for your support
Date: 11/8/2023 10:45:00 AM
This! Your pairings makes it known just what you’re trying to express! Just brilliant my beautiful soul sis! I just love the sarcasm of it all and the fun words you’ve used and the rhymes! It’s such a breath of fresh air reading this for more reasons than one, but because I know this isn’t your usual way of writing and it’s so new—I’m loving this! Your diversity is soul hitting! And yes, this describes exactly how people can make one feel..unnecessarily. This piece is so fun and light, despite!
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Date: 11/8/2023 10:50:00 AM
Awwn thank u beautifully biased soul sis! I showed this to my other soul sis em poetic she said its a genius piece! U both are seriously too biased hahaha! Thank u so much truly im blessed to have you both cosmically connected forever, no trolls can break us
Date: 11/8/2023 7:42:00 AM
Dear Ink, These are some truly remarkable pairs. You did an excellent job. You have crafted a stunning set of footles that match perfectly. I really loved "Drama Momma" and "green grime cold crime" Brian will surely like this. BOL in the contest
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Date: 11/8/2023 10:29:00 AM
Ahhh thank you dear Sotto for your encouraging words and besh wishes: truly always grateful for your support
Date: 11/8/2023 6:05:00 AM
Very evocative pairs, my friend. Splendidly done, Ink. Brian loves these!
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Date: 11/8/2023 10:29:00 AM
Ahh thank you so much Vijay, i like trying new things. And learning: appreciate your support always
Date: 11/8/2023 5:56:00 AM
Great short poems and write! (reason im no longer active there) Me too :-) Have a great day!
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Date: 11/8/2023 10:27:00 AM
Oh thank you for your visit. Appreciate your support
Date: 11/8/2023 4:35:00 AM
Bring on the "Billy Goats Gruff"
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Date: 11/8/2023 10:03:00 AM
Haha! Good one love that thank you so much
Date: 11/8/2023 3:45:00 AM
a well-constructed string of footles, dear Ink. I'm impressed. I've tried writing a footle or two...have not yet gotten comfortable with the form. Seeing yours inspires me. Have a great day, Sara
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Date: 11/8/2023 4:02:00 AM
Ahh i was shy to post this too cus its not my style of writing really, but i tried it just for fun, im sure anything you write will be just a gem! I cant wait to read one of your footles. Sending you light always, thank you so much for being so supportive always
Date: 11/8/2023 3:43:00 AM
We have just had a horrible incident without our family(in-law) from someone deceiving our family member and getting money from them until they were penniless and desperate. She committed suicide was the way the family found out about it. I think the person who did it should be found and charged with murder. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 11/8/2023 4:00:00 AM
Dear Sara, how traumatizing and haunting is that, im so sorry your family went through that and lost your loved ones because of trolls, yes so many cat fishing and manipulating vulnerable individuals its sad reality of social media, and its hard to even find them unless they have an instagram account i know few that can help in such situations, to find their location. Im so sorry once again, and thank you for sharing your experience with us. Sending your family light and strength during this time
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Date: 11/8/2023 3:44:00 AM
oh my, how tragic!
Date: 11/8/2023 1:36:00 AM
This should go down very well for Brian's contest. He's the inventor of the footle and this is an excellent example of a string of footles - well done, I see this placing very highly x
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Date: 11/8/2023 2:20:00 AM
Thank you so much for sharing, i just checked it out, ah so much to learn on soup . I guess you’ve been here for long and know about many forms by now. Learning from all of you talented poets.
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Date: 11/8/2023 2:06:00 AM
He's recently done a didactic on the form too -https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/to_footle_with_footles_1596041
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Date: 11/8/2023 1:48:00 AM
Oh wow i didnt know he was the one that invented the form, hah im not so good with rhymes but i had fun doin this one, i hope i did it correctly, thank you so much for your feedback. Truly grateful
Date: 11/8/2023 1:34:00 AM
This is a good one . Really loved it
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Date: 11/8/2023 1:47:00 AM
Awwn i know u love rhymes thank u twinsy
Date: 11/8/2023 12:32:00 AM
I've written a few "footle's" before and they are fun to do. You did well "Drama Momma" (lol) Have a happy Wednesday, Ink E. Hugs Charlie
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Date: 11/8/2023 12:37:00 AM
Ah i should read urs, this was so new to me i have been reading few footles and i never knew wat it was until yes recently thought ill give it a go haha thank u so much for your visit
Date: 11/7/2023 11:42:00 PM
Aaaaa this loner moaner ae papiii… need spf aee… tsk snitches glitches… cannot aeee no need such toxicity… spf 2000 aee.. this piece is a unique form aee … I tried to write on this form .. I gave up… um a lil mentally challenged like that aee ..
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Date: 11/8/2023 12:27:00 AM
Spf wont help them trolls lol ugh. Theres a new drama mama on there be careful lolol

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