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Tempting Tart

Simply delightful Just like trifle Sticky Toffee Or even banoffee New York baked Yummy carrot cake But you can't beat the sugary taste That sticks to your lips and clings to your waist, Of the lushness of strawberry tart Tingling your tongue and melting your heart Crumbling of pastry, licking of cream Juicy bite of strawberry, heavenly dream 23 Oct 2015

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Date: 1/22/2016 7:57:00 AM
As a Bloke, I enjoyed the parallel.lol
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Laura Hay
Date: 1/22/2016 11:08:00 AM
Tee hee ??, glad you enjoyed, thanks for stopping by! Rgds Laura
Date: 1/22/2016 7:23:00 AM
mmm a delicious write Laura I feel hungry now!!!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Laura Hay
Date: 1/22/2016 7:38:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by! warm regards, Laura
Date: 1/12/2016 1:19:00 PM
Your description is so vivid, it feels like a lucid dream. I can almost taste the tart. Great job! And I love the rhymes btw:)
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Laura Hay
Date: 1/22/2016 7:37:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments! warm regards, Laura
Date: 12/8/2015 11:12:00 AM
cute poem..!!!
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Laura Hay
Date: 1/22/2016 7:37:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by! warm regards, Laura
Date: 11/13/2015 10:56:00 AM
Very descriptive work about the Strawberry Tart..A delightful dessert that you have described..Thanks for stopping by my page..
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Laura Hay
Date: 1/22/2016 7:35:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments! warm regards, Laura
Date: 11/12/2015 4:19:00 PM
Great little verse Laura, tempting to say the least, cheers Kev
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Laura Hay
Date: 11/13/2015 1:34:00 AM
Thanks again Kev! Warm regards, Laura.
Date: 11/5/2015 1:35:00 PM
Stopping by to enjoy the sound of a sweet tempting tart. MMM... my sweet tooth is still enjoying this poem. SKAT
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Laura Hay
Date: 11/5/2015 1:56:00 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed this SKAT, thanks for dropping by, warm regards, Laura
Date: 11/1/2015 10:42:00 PM
Nice rhyme, Laura. Love strawberry tart or anything with strawberries.
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Laura Hay
Date: 11/3/2015 7:35:00 AM
Thank you James :)
Date: 11/1/2015 10:25:00 PM
Congrats on ur superb win with this yummy awesome write Laura!
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Laura Hay
Date: 11/3/2015 7:35:00 AM
Thank you very much!! :)
Date: 11/1/2015 8:08:00 PM
Laura, I couldn't ignore this one because of its yummy 2nd stanza that really tickles my senses but also my cheeks for a chuckle...!! the rhyme goes we and imagery is thumbs up! BIG CONGRATULATIONS!~ Olive Eloisa =`)
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Laura Hay
Date: 11/3/2015 7:35:00 AM
Thank you very much Olive Eloisa, much appreciated :)
Date: 11/1/2015 5:01:00 PM
Congrats for your win. A tasty delight!
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Laura Hay
Date: 11/3/2015 7:34:00 AM
Thanks Andrea :)
Date: 11/1/2015 2:55:00 PM
Laura, congratulations. SKAT
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Laura Hay
Date: 11/1/2015 2:57:00 PM
Thank you SKAT! ;) Kind Regards, Laura.
Date: 11/1/2015 1:25:00 PM
Ahh!! Melt in your mouth goodness!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Laura Hay
Date: 11/1/2015 2:56:00 PM
Thanks very much Sara, Kind Regards, Laura.
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Laura Hay
Date: 11/1/2015 2:55:00 PM
Thank you Eve! Much appreciated, Kind Regards, Laura.
Date: 11/1/2015 12:34:00 PM
Wonderful write, Laura, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Laura Hay
Date: 11/1/2015 2:57:00 PM
Thank you Eve! Much appreciated, Kind Regards, Laura.
Date: 11/1/2015 8:33:00 AM
Your tart gives you a sweet win, Laura. Congratulations. I'm interested in your 'banoffee.' Banana coffee cake?
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Laura Hay
Date: 11/1/2015 2:55:00 PM
Thank you Lin ;) , my banoffee is banana and toffee cheesecake which is delish too :)
Date: 10/24/2015 5:22:00 PM
Excellent, Laura! You manage to tempt with your tart content and the lovely rhyme that goes with it! The second part of the poem sounds delicious:) #7 ~ sweet regards // paul
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Laura Hay
Date: 11/1/2015 2:53:00 PM
Thank you so much for your support Paul, much appreciated as always, kind regards, Laura.

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