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Against sheer lace that filters in, pink halos traced with white, she leans against the window's frame, enveloped by the light The pregnant pause, as twilight crowns accentuates her form. The beauty of her shape is drowned, in mother-love transformed _____________________________________ For Nette's Contest "Let Me Feel Your Lines" Visual #4 4/1/15

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Date: 5/16/2015 12:06:00 AM
wow, this is probably going to be the most original one on the winners list. Great job, CArrie. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 5/15/2015 12:35:00 PM
Way to go with this winner!! Very descriptive and expressive..Sara
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Date: 5/15/2015 12:24:00 PM
Such mellow delicacy spills from these lines, Carrie! Great visuals, both in the written imagery and the accompanying picture. Congrats on a very merited win. // paul
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Date: 5/15/2015 4:13:00 AM
This is so you, Carrie. I recognize your strokes for such delicate lines. Loved it! Congratulations! Kim
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Date: 5/14/2015 7:39:00 PM
Carrie :-) Amazing Lines, Congratulations ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/14/2015 5:51:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Carrie:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/14/2015 5:20:00 PM
beautiful Carrie,, congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Date: 5/14/2015 5:04:00 PM
So lovely, Carrie. I feel the beauty of motherhood in your lines. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/2/2015 3:22:00 AM
What a flawless write, Carrie. Oh....It is so so beautiful. I enjoyed this write immensely. Hugs
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Date: 4/1/2015 11:05:00 PM
Beautiful, Carrie! I can picture the mother-to-be at the nursery window...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 4/1/2015 10:39:00 PM
Great imagery Carrie! Gl in contest!
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Date: 4/1/2015 9:47:00 PM
this is lovely, carrie!
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Date: 4/1/2015 4:54:00 PM
simply divine - the imagery is exceptional!!!! good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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