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Millie Millipede - Nursery Rhyme

Millie millipede needed some new shoes for her summer holiday fun Disney cruise Her old shoes were tight making Millie hop so she went with mommy to the shoe shop Millie hobbled through the door and began to wail the poor shop assistant’s face turned quite pale because Millie millipede had got forty tiny feet so she sat Millie down on a comfortable seat The shop assistant summoned a little elf to fetch some shoe boxes from a high shelf and when Millie tried some shiny red boots she said, "These are wonderful substitutes" The boots were leather and had a thick heel for walking round Disneyland they’d be ideal With so many feet Millie needed twenty pairs so the elf assistant dashed up and down stairs Mom was given a discount when the bill was paid so they stopped at a café for sweet lemonade Millie wore her shiny boots all the way home stopping off to show them to her pal Ted gnome. Nursery Rhyme 2 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Eve Roper 03/12/21

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Date: 3/23/2021 10:49:00 AM
Back with congrats on your win dear Jan... God bless.. Hugs.. ~ Ani
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Date: 3/21/2021 5:51:00 PM
WOW! Jen, what a beautiful creation! I am amazed! Love ~ Mala
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Date: 3/21/2021 4:14:00 PM
Wow!!! This is a fabulous creation Jan. I love it and the video is such a nice accompaniment. Congratulations on your win. This is a fave. :)
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Date: 3/20/2021 9:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Jan, in my Nursery Rhyme2 contest. A great story for little children. Please visit my blog on the contest . Nursery Rhyme 2 Contest. - Eve Roper's Blog (poetrysoup.com) Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/20/2021 6:05:00 PM
Jan, back with congratulations on your well deserved win with this marvellous write ~ Belle :-) x
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Date: 3/20/2021 12:03:00 PM
Had a feeling this would be a winner! Congratulations Jan. Off to the cobbler for some "sole!" Hugs Sam
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Date: 3/20/2021 11:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. You made me laugh. A cute write. Have a blessed day/weekend.............
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Date: 3/20/2021 10:36:00 AM
- Back with congratulations, Jan :)
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Date: 3/14/2021 6:00:00 PM
Too funny U R!
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Date: 3/14/2021 10:31:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this Jan... elf assistant dashed up and down the stairs.. Haha...loved it... Hugs.. ~ Ani
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Date: 3/14/2021 5:47:00 AM
That is a brilliant nursery rhyme! I absolutely loved it Jan! Awesome!!
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Date: 3/14/2021 5:15:00 AM
Great fun pen Jan, really enjoyed reading this one. Hope you're having a lovely day, blessings and hugs,Gordon
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Date: 3/13/2021 3:50:00 PM
G’day Jan … it’s a wonder Millie goes anywhere with the time it would take to put her shoes on - good on you Jan - Lindsay
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Date: 3/13/2021 11:30:00 AM
Well done and congratulations, but only a woman could think of shopping for 40-pair of shoes! Aloha! Rico
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/13/2021 1:50:00 PM
lol and I HATE buying them myself as I have small feet lol :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/13/2021 11:11:00 AM
This one is definitely "on its toes" with "soul" Jan. So much fun! Best wishes for the contest. Hugs times 40!
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Date: 3/13/2021 1:48:00 PM
Thanks so much Sam it was fun to write:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/13/2021 9:46:00 AM
What delightful characters you created, Jan! I love hearing of Millie's shoe-shopping challenges. Very original. Hope Ted liked her new boots! Best wishes for a win. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 3/13/2021 1:48:00 PM
Thanks Carolyn:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/13/2021 6:30:00 AM
Adorable - Loved it. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
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Date: 3/13/2021 1:47:00 PM
Thanks Gina:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 3/13/2021 4:07:00 AM
Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. I couldn't imagine the shoe bill though. Sara
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Date: 3/13/2021 1:47:00 PM
Thanks sara:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 3/13/2021 1:12:00 AM
Such a beautiful tale for children, Jan, you're a pro at this:) I can't even think of what to write!
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Date: 3/13/2021 12:29:00 PM
Thanks Jo I used to work with little children and just imagined things that they would like to hear:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/12/2021 11:13:00 PM
A lovely tale for a nursery rhyme. Best for a win.
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Date: 3/13/2021 12:28:00 PM
Thanks Victor:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/12/2021 3:59:00 PM
very creative story, Jan. Love your imagination and that song. Oh the memories.
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Date: 3/12/2021 4:50:00 PM
thanks Andrea,:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/12/2021 3:07:00 PM
Jan that’s amazing, so clever and a most enjoyable read, children are sure to love it. Belle :-) x
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Date: 3/12/2021 3:23:00 PM
aww thanks Belle:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/12/2021 2:51:00 PM
That’s a lot of leather! A fun write Jan. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 3/12/2021 3:04:00 PM
Thanks Rick it was such fun to write:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 3/12/2021 2:44:00 PM
Blimey, Jan. up and down that ladder twenty times? Hope the shop had a good elf and safety policy. If I owned that shop I’d be rubbing my hands together. Nice tale. Terry
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Date: 3/12/2021 3:02:00 PM
lol thats why i gave her a discount at the end lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 3/12/2021 2:20:00 PM
- "Oh mother ... read it again ... I love it ":) - The elf was so cute, Jan :) - A wonderful poem - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a safe and lovely weekend :) - Here "corona on a red level" ... a scary time - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/12/2021 3:02:00 PM
aww Anne-lise so sorry your country is bad, we too are in a bad place, had our first death today since November. lockdown continues but we are ok. take care sweet friend:-) hugs jan xx

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