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Haiku 25 Your Answer

answer quickly love do not hide your face from me my heart quakes – waiting . . . David Meade 11/11/2014 Live Generously

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Lorraine Ferns

Date: 11/19/2014 2:05:00 PM

I love the visual!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/14/2014 1:01:00 AM

Did She say yes? : ) Sweet post Dave!

Trinity Biles

Date: 11/12/2014 12:00:00 PM

I can't get enough of your work. -TJ

David Meade
Date: 11/12/2014 4:20:00 PM

You do wonders for my self-esteem!! Thank-you for your visit and I look forward to reading your works. All the best my friend.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 11/12/2014 8:58:00 AM

O yes, another hit."heart quakes" quite appropriate. Love. xxxx rajat I add it to my fav list....rajat

David Meade
Date: 11/12/2014 4:21:00 PM

Shake, rattle and quake . . . thank-you dear friend for your visit.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/11/2014 3:42:00 PM

very nice, David. You forgot your e on end of hid.

David Meade
Date: 11/11/2014 3:50:00 PM

Thank-you Andrea -- good catch! That was the answer I was waiting for!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/11/2014 3:28:00 PM

Ahh!! So senryu like..Some faces need to be hidden but the person just wants to steal the lime light and doesn't hide..Thanks for dropping by..Sara

David Meade
Date: 11/12/2014 7:10:00 AM

Your the best Sara, thank-you for being you!

Paul Callus

Date: 11/11/2014 11:57:00 AM

Lovely and intriguing haiku, David! Wondering what the question was....a proposal, maybe....good luck to you:) // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/11/2014 11:13:00 AM

- Lovely !! // Anne-Lise :)

David Meade
Date: 11/12/2014 7:14:00 AM

Thank-you -- I hope your day is filled with love. All the very best.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/11/2014 10:56:00 AM

aww hope she says YES:-) great haiku:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 11/12/2014 9:13:00 AM

Depends who it is and what you are seeking! Hugs Jan xx

David Meade
Date: 11/12/2014 7:18:00 AM

thank-you Jan -- you are always the sweetest. -- sometimes . . . a no answer is the best!!