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[9 is not PRIME Poetry Contest hosted by  Suzette Richards]

flying on the wings of euphoria seduced by transient desire love-struck Icarus falls to abysmal depths

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Date: 8/29/2024 4:35:00 PM
Dear Paul, your poetic brevity is as beautifully expressed as it is tragically insightful. Your golden pen is ever impressive my friend. I see congrats are in order.. bravo! I hope all is well with you and yours. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/5/2024 1:10:00 PM
Thank you dear Susan; indeed I relish brevity, though in rare instances I have allowed my pen more freedom :) Warm regards, hugs and goodnight my friend. / paul
Date: 7/28/2024 7:08:00 AM
Yess so true and in so few words you get the point across perfectly! Xo
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Date: 7/29/2024 2:52:00 AM
Thank you, Crystol; your visit and comments are truly appreciated. // paul
Date: 7/25/2024 8:15:00 PM
This is fantastic. Congrats, my friend
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Date: 7/27/2024 12:03:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea. Hope you're having an enjoyable weekend // paul
Date: 7/25/2024 6:36:00 AM
Very nice! Congrats!
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Date: 7/25/2024 2:03:00 PM
Thank you and regards, Kim // paul
Date: 7/25/2024 6:11:00 AM
Very nice winner. Way to go. Congratulations on your win. Sara K
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Date: 7/25/2024 2:09:00 PM
Thank you for liking and the congrats, Sara. Best regards // paul
Date: 7/25/2024 3:12:00 AM
Brilliant write, congratulations
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Date: 7/25/2024 1:03:00 PM
Thank you and regards, Terry // paul
Date: 7/13/2024 9:16:00 AM
The rise and fall of Icarus so skillfully expressed as addiction, well done Paul
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Date: 7/15/2024 2:57:00 AM
Thank you for the lovely feedback, Michelle. I just read and was much impressed by your contest entry! ~ Regards // paul
Date: 7/10/2024 2:21:00 PM
Well done! Hope you do well in the contest.
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Date: 7/10/2024 2:53:00 PM
Thank you, Eileen. I rarely take part in contests nowadays, though I do use some to tickle my muse (in this unbearable heat she feels the lack of energy). Warm regards, my friend. // paul
Date: 7/10/2024 6:09:00 AM
The addiction cycle in brief. Brilliant write Paul
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Date: 7/10/2024 2:35:00 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting, Tommy (and for liking!) Regards // paul

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