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Suburban Lovechild

Date: 3/15/2015 3:13:00 PM

Powerful, amazing what can be conveyed in a few lines, nice write.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/15/2015 3:15:00 PM

- Suburban, thanks for visiting and comments - xx // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Johnson

Date: 1/16/2015 10:37:00 AM

There aren't words that can be spoken. When at Christmas, your heart is broken. Your Haiku shines deep and dark. At a time when, what is that? Hark. We hear the angels sing. Peace. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/16/2015 12:17:00 PM

- Robert, thanks for visiting and comments - peace // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 1/4/2015 12:45:00 PM

Anne-Lise, Sorry for not responding here sooner. I'm getting caught up with my correspondence. This is an excellent Haiku write. The imagery is quite compelling and to the point. Bravo!! A "7" and a FAV from me!! Best Always, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/4/2015 1:30:00 PM

- Thanks for the "fav", a 7, visiting and comments, Gary - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Donna Jones

Date: 1/2/2015 8:53:00 AM

Makes every moment especially Christmas memories so special...for we never know what tomorrow brings....such a special poem Anne Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/2/2015 8:56:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and comments, Donna - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 12/31/2014 10:04:00 AM

WISH YOU HAPPY NEW YEAR ANNE-LISE. LIVE ON CLOUD NINE.---rajat

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/1/2015 5:33:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and comments, Rajat - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Leon Enriquez

Date: 12/31/2014 4:46:00 AM

Dear Anne-Lise: Thank you for the support my friend. Here's wishing you and your loved ones A Happy New Year filled with peace, joy and love. All my best wishes on the last day of 2014, Leon.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/31/2014 6:11:00 AM

- Leon, thanks for visiting and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sandip Goswami

Date: 12/30/2014 2:33:00 PM

Brilliant. I felt the words at the Church on 25th December. Thank you very much dear friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/31/2014 6:11:00 AM

- Sandip, thanks for visiting and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/29/2014 3:33:00 PM

sadness at Xmas. it happens more than we know!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/30/2014 2:59:00 AM

- True, Andrea - // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 12/28/2014 3:23:00 PM

Death comes and the sparkle is suddenly gone. Very well transmitted image, Anne Lise. Glad to hear your dad is not as bad as he was. Take care. #7 /x/ paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/28/2014 3:50:00 PM

- Paul, thanks for visiting and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Etienne Lariviere

Date: 12/28/2014 12:59:00 PM

this is very expressive of season, tres bien

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/28/2014 3:49:00 PM

- Etienne, thanks for visiting and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/28/2014 7:29:00 AM

This is a tremendous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this fantastic poem this morning! You have written a magnificent poem here Anne Lise! What a terrific piece, great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/28/2014 7:41:00 AM

- Dear "old" friend Russell, thanks for visiting and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/28/2014 4:57:00 AM

Hope it is just an excellent Haiku and nothing more, dear Anne-Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/28/2014 5:05:00 AM

- My father was so ill, we thought he would die now at Christmas - but now he has become a little better (yesterday) - death always comes unexpectedly - Dear friend Demetrios, thanks for visiting and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joel Thornton

Date: 12/28/2014 1:56:00 AM

EXCELLENT!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/28/2014 4:26:00 AM

- Joel, thanks for visiting and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

David Meade

Date: 12/27/2014 6:45:00 PM

Your haiku reminds us that as we celebrate a birth we also mourn a death. May you find love and warmth as you grieve the lost. Hugs and love from me.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/28/2014 4:26:00 AM

- Life: birth to death - David, thanks for visiting and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/27/2014 6:10:00 PM

Oh! it's very sad, my lovely friend. It already happened in our state, 64 innocent people have been killed by terrorists here on the eve of Christmas. Heart paining situation that's. I am with you, my lovely friend of always. Loved always,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/28/2014 4:22:00 AM

- Yeah, I read about it ..... horrible killing! - My thoughts to their families - Thanks for visiting and comments dear friend Bl - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/27/2014 4:09:00 PM

OH.....So sad. :( Death is sad at anytime but especially so during this season. My heart is with you, dear. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/28/2014 4:23:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and comments, dear Eileen - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/27/2014 2:59:00 PM

I hope that death hasn't come to your home or family during this Christmas season..That seems like it would be extra hard on a family..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/27/2014 3:20:00 PM

- Thanks for visiting and comments, dear Sara - oxox // Anne-Lise :)