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You are or were always on my mind Poetry Contest

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She lay serenely on the cold slab Elegantly dressed in white, A secret smile embossed upon her lips That even death could ne'er erase. I looked at her for quite some time. My memories dwelt for a time long Of by-gone days when we were young, Days fully lived and justly savoured, Days of exciting, enticing emotions, Revisited and recaptured mostly in my past. Alas, she's gone forever now, The finite sands of time ran out, As spring and summer always do. Life was spilled now and hope died, Still no dreary dirge for me, But rather squander time in living dreams So I often indulge in my autumn days, You will always be on my mind.

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Date: 6/28/2024 6:57:00 PM
A true expression deep from the heart. Lovely writing Victor.
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Date: 6/12/2024 11:54:00 AM
You remind me of Robert Frost poetry, Victor, always you see her behind the trees or in a garden. Prescious is the image and tribute to your wife. xhugs
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Date: 6/9/2024 1:35:00 PM
Co grays, Victor. So pleased this made the top ten
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Date: 6/8/2024 4:26:00 AM
A beautiful expression of heartfelt sentiment and love dear Victor. A wonderful tribute to a wonderful woman. Yes, her memory will always live on...Love and Hugs
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Date: 6/6/2024 2:38:00 PM
Victor, a beautiful tribute poem to your wife. - Hugs
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Date: 6/5/2024 6:39:00 AM
I wrote a poem siimilar to this yesars ago, when thinking of my mothers passingg, so iit was esasy to relate to..i never count how many times a day she’s in my cociousnees…mother is an “alwaays presence as the days fly by, you expressed your feelings well.so very well Pangie
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Date: 6/3/2024 5:30:00 PM
I'm sorry for your loss. This is beautiful-
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Date: 6/3/2024 1:27:00 PM
Always what a beautiful tribute she was a lovely lady many blessings Victor have a great day
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Date: 6/3/2024 12:45:00 PM
- She was a beautiful lady, Victor :) - Love this beautiful poem :) - hugs
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Date: 6/3/2024 10:20:00 AM
Well this is very odd. I remember reading and commenting to this one but I don't see my comment. I love this tribute to your beloved wife
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Date: 6/3/2024 1:32:00 AM
Ok I have a tear or 2, so very heartwarming and touching victor.
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Date: 6/3/2024 12:10:00 AM
so touching .hommage, may be you were friends ? a great loss for poetry, thanks Victor
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Date: 6/2/2024 9:26:00 PM
A great loss, I'm sure, but the memories you share are beautiful
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Date: 6/2/2024 8:52:00 PM
Your luck was to have found such joy in love..I hope you have found strength to appreciate life as she would have wished. Her photo shows a very beautiful soul.
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Date: 6/2/2024 7:46:00 PM
Memories are a joy and a comfort. Your touching tribute is quite lovely, Victor. Blessings.
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Date: 6/2/2024 10:05:00 AM
A heartfelt tribute to your loved one Victor
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Date: 6/2/2024 9:58:00 AM
This is so touching and beautiful Victor...
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Date: 6/2/2024 8:21:00 AM
Victor, She perpetually occupies your thoughts, never to be forgotten till the moment you reunite.
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Date: 6/2/2024 6:39:00 AM
The memories keep us stable sometimes. It's okay to remember the good and bad times we've spent with our loved ones. It's always important to spend time with them whilst they are alive and create a lot that would see us through the phase when death comes. It's never easy. I hope the good memories keep you chuckling Victor. She's in a better place. Lost my grandad a week ago and I've had to soak my pillows every night, but this time, I'm using writing as therapy. Cheers, Love stands.
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Date: 6/2/2024 6:20:00 AM
You loved her, see her in death, in life, with love…still no dreary dirge, but a great tribute to your lovely wife. I oft see in my mind, my mom on her death bed, but also in her various stages of life. The early mom…the one in later years…Blessings, dear Victor. My heart is touched by your thoughts.
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Date: 6/2/2024 6:17:00 AM
Death is not easy to handle when someone close dies. I have not had to deal with the death of a spouse though and I know that would be even harder. I do know it takes times to heal the emotions and the memories will always be there. They pop up when not expected. A very good write for the contest and also to help keep the memory alive. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 6/2/2024 4:56:00 AM
Dear Victor, Your heartfelt emotions captures the bittersweet emotions of mourning a lost love with such elegant verse. The serene imagery contrasted with the raw feelings of memories revisited packs an emotional punch. Thank you for sharing this deeply moving, exquisitely crafted piece - it's a testament to your immense poetic talent. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 6/2/2024 1:08:00 AM
I felt the depth of grief youv expressed here in the most eloquent manner. So touching and poetic plus heartfelt. Sometimes even death cant erase somethings, such as love. Your love so very vivid and powerful! I really felt this poem and thats how you always deliver brilliance! Evocative! Pleasure reading this. Best wishes
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Date: 6/1/2024 10:45:00 PM
Victor your beautiful poem of pure love and longing touched my heart. Its obvious how much you loved and miss your beautiful wife. She looks lovely in her photo….she has a very sweet kind face Victor! I am sorry for your sadness. Cuddles…Debx
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Date: 6/1/2024 10:43:00 PM
Always in your mind never to be gone until you meet once again. Hugs my friend.
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