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*For the Glenn Hughes contest. Needless to say this won't be everyone's cup of chamomile tea. Based on the song WAR PIGS by Black Sabbath.

(music intro) clergy teaching dogma classes just like wizards at black masses evil minds that sow confusion hailing godless evolution Babylon with all her daughters share in blessing wartime slaughter casting spells upon mankind puppeteering brainwashed minds (oh Lord yeah) (music) (bridge) popes and bishops wearing royal fleece sending our young men to their graves with their lips they bless the Prince of Peace promising the hordes that Jesus saves Reverends trumpeting their altar calls "Come get saved and you'll be healed" blind man now before the preacher falls another fallacy unveiled (yeah) (music) Judgment day brings tribulation the proud reject capitulation angels rain down from the heavens wielding bloody swords as weapons Babylon has missed her calling on their knees her prelates crawling time to face Jah's King of Kings Satan cowers, heaven sings (music to finale) (bonus stanza) Now God's judgment day has ended his sovereignty and name defended kingdom blessings here at last mankind's woes have all but past Jesus heals the broken-hearted brings to life our dear departed Jubilee's a thousand years no more suff'ring, pain or tears (Oh Lord yeah)

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Date: 10/14/2024 9:38:00 AM
Nice lyrics. Make you think about salvation.
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Tom Woody
Date: 10/14/2024 9:42:00 AM
Yes, that's why I added the extra stanza. Thx
Date: 10/13/2024 7:32:00 PM
Yes a great rendition Tom..This should get a person thinking..All creation awaits Gods next Move.'
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Tom Woody
Date: 10/14/2024 5:23:00 AM
Eagerly waiting. Thx Joe
Date: 10/10/2024 8:28:00 PM
An undeniable truth you have written Tom. Skillfully written exposing the enemies and sharing the Triumphing ending of our Lords return. Amen! Thank you for sharing...
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Tom Woody
Date: 10/12/2024 10:30:00 AM
And thank you back for visit
Date: 9/21/2024 10:09:00 AM
Dear Tom, I admire your poetic stand here and the impressive creative expression of your verse and awesome rhymes. Congratulations for your success in the contest. Warmest wishes poet friend.. ~Suze
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/21/2024 5:28:00 PM
Always good to see you on my page Susan, especially when the poetic theme is a tough swallow
Date: 9/17/2024 4:14:00 PM
Big congrats. This really needed to be on the winner list
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/17/2024 4:50:00 PM
Agreed. Thx
Date: 9/16/2024 7:03:00 AM
true lines. congratulations dear poet.
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/16/2024 8:15:00 AM
Thx
Date: 9/16/2024 5:49:00 AM
Bank to say congratulations on placing! Xo
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Crystol Woods
Date: 10/25/2024 10:24:00 AM
If you're asking me Joe, yes you may. If you're asking Tom then you have my permission too lol!!! Jk;)
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Joe Maverick
Date: 10/14/2024 3:38:00 PM
8th place Tom?? Hmm well That tells me a lot about the Judge and Gods action through that judge.' As a matter of fact He will teach us All.. As we should expect I may soup mail you later.?
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/16/2024 6:28:00 AM
8th place, ugh! Oh well, we gave it a shot. Thx so much
Date: 9/14/2024 4:26:00 AM
Chamomile tea has never been my favourite, and to be honest, neither has Black Sabbath. But I feel the heart of your poem, Tommy. You're right—justice will come. Too many people have gotten away with violence in the name of God, cloaked in righteousness, but there’s a reckoning for that kind of cruelty. No one escapes forever. Great lyrics for a song....Hugs
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/14/2024 5:41:00 AM
I'm not a fan of tea or BS either, but I find their lyrics useful on occasion. Thanks always for your support!
Date: 9/12/2024 11:01:00 AM
You portray civilization with all of its nefarious evil trappings. As an agnostic, I take your sentiments to heart, resonates deeply. God save us Ozzy and may God save Ozzy! Well done, my best, Robert
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/12/2024 1:15:00 PM
Much thx
Date: 9/12/2024 8:16:00 AM
Well sung Tom..I can hear you in my heart And soul, the greatest Rock is going to roll ' Flattenjng each mountain of sin there is nowhere to hide from Him!!
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/12/2024 8:23:00 AM
No crack, cave or crevice. Thx Joe
Date: 9/11/2024 3:03:00 PM
So talented! I love how your lyrics fit seamlessly with the originals... but you've made this a powerful message of truth. One of the 4 hidden dynasties is religion... evil works in there too corrupt. You've remained true to yourself and to your faith... wonderful! Xo
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Crystol Woods
Date: 9/14/2024 12:31:00 PM
I'll always be as honest with you as you are with me...we have to count on someone to tell us like it is right? But I'll never be mean ... no need for that. Plus, I still don't know what I don't know, none of us do! Xoxo
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/11/2024 3:57:00 PM
I honestly didn't know how you would take this one. Your support is much appreciated Crystol
Date: 9/9/2024 2:53:00 PM
Hey Tom...this is thought provoking indeed. When religion is used to divide or enforce principles contrary to officially stated principles of peace, charity, and well-being, a problem for us there is. Thanks for this one.
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/9/2024 3:05:00 PM
Worse than any global pandemic. Cure on the way
Date: 9/9/2024 11:32:00 AM
Jesus heals the broken-hearted, live and let live, I for one, will lean on the light of Him, Tom, your poems are always so full of info, and thought reflection. Thank you for sharing, have a blessed day :)
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/9/2024 2:09:00 PM
Thx and you too Rose
Date: 9/9/2024 8:58:00 AM
Hello Tom, I was a fan of Black Sabbath when they were on the music scene decades ago and War Pigs was one of the songs I loved. You have laid it out straight that what some Christian religions has done through the ages to corrupt Jesus and the apostles' teachings is inexcusable. God will hold accountable those who have used it for self-gain. Here in Pennsylvania, there were 300 priests that were identified as sexual predators through the years, and their names were published. I believe in our God and our God only who can save and bring us home and bring justice in the end. Well Inked! - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/9/2024 9:12:00 AM
I'm glad you were familiar with the song bc the original lyrics focused on the political and military leaders culpability. Mine highlights religion's role. Thx for visit
Date: 9/9/2024 8:34:00 AM
I chose War Pigs a few months back. Love your take on that song. It's cool you wrote it like a song.
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/9/2024 8:46:00 AM
Thx much
Date: 9/9/2024 1:00:00 AM
I believe we have two judgements for ourselves, both of which are the same: one for the soul and the other for the end of times when our body joins the soul. No one escapes judgement. Prayer is the key. Blessings.
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/9/2024 5:19:00 AM
Thx for visit Vic
Date: 9/8/2024 10:14:00 PM
Good will overcome evil in the end, we just have to keep our faith and be patient. Using God as an excuse to carry out evil deeds, well hell awaits. Tom
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/9/2024 5:20:00 AM
Thx for taking the time to read
Date: 9/8/2024 10:45:00 AM
I'm not a fan of Black Sabbath, but I do enjoy good writing when I see/read it. BOL in the contest, Tom.
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/8/2024 10:57:00 AM
I'm not either anymore but had this floating around in my head. Thx Jim
Date: 9/7/2024 9:35:00 PM
Dear Tom, I see your faith and your efforts to glorify God whenever you get a chance. Ultimately the virtuous will win over the vice. The last stanza gives so much hope. You have made your poem into a beautiful song. If it is for a contest, all the best, dear friend.
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/8/2024 5:45:00 AM
Thx so much Valsa
Date: 9/7/2024 3:36:00 PM
Very powerful writing. Loved it!
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/7/2024 3:40:00 PM
Hey thx much
Date: 9/7/2024 10:50:00 AM
Hello Tom ,outstanding poetry, the Day of Judgement is unavoidable. Have a blessed day dear Tom
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/7/2024 3:40:00 PM
It is indeed. Thx Mu
Date: 9/7/2024 9:24:00 AM
erm...I so wanna put this on suno and see what it spews out. Well writ
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/7/2024 3:42:00 PM
Thx for support. The song was awesome
Date: 9/7/2024 8:12:00 AM
Indeed, there will come a day of Judgement. In each life, repetitive throughout until self absolution -- we are our own suffering...and solution. God is patient -- but perhaps not forever. Well written my friend.
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/7/2024 3:42:00 PM
Thx much Joe
Date: 9/7/2024 7:00:00 AM
Whoa sends shivers down my spine also! What a powerful write this is tomsz! I love the picture youv used and also how youv interpreted and written for the song! I think robert will love this one! And i loved the song too but never wrote for it! However youve done very well with rhymes and i hear a rhythm as i read your lyrics! Good to see you writing and posting for a contest! Best wishes and sending you light always
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/7/2024 3:43:00 PM
Thank you so much for support Inky
Date: 9/7/2024 6:59:00 AM
Very clever poetry and so true also... It flows really well...
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/7/2024 3:43:00 PM
I shoot for clever. Thx
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