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Without a Parachute the Other Flies

Never let your heart win the debate If your mind has a cogent argument. They both wander from time to time; One has a temperament to analyze, Without a parachute the other flies. April 26, 2019

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Date: 8/20/2019 4:07:00 PM
My mind gets me into trouble. My heart> Never, Panagiota
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Date: 5/3/2019 2:50:00 PM
Great imagery! This is so true; well done.
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Date: 5/1/2019 1:11:00 PM
I always give the same advice....listen to both heart and mind before making a decision; they balance each other. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 4/30/2019 12:28:00 PM
The Bible tells us that above all things the heart is deceitful. Very often the mind will give us sensible advice when the heart leads us in another less sensible direction. Very well said my friend. God Bless, JB
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/30/2019 5:36:00 PM
Much appreciate your detailed feedback..I agree with the sentiments in your comment..many thanks, Judy.
Date: 4/28/2019 7:47:00 AM
So well expressed Vijay...The heart wins out!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/28/2019 8:05:00 AM
Thank you Joseph..much appreciate.
Date: 4/28/2019 2:50:00 AM
Always listen to your heart. It never lies.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/28/2019 8:04:00 AM
Much appreciate your visit and comments Carole--many thanks.
Date: 4/27/2019 5:43:00 PM
My heart has flown many times without a parachute. Well expressed Vijay. Thanks for your visit.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/28/2019 8:04:00 AM
It does have that tendency--much appreciate, Richard..many thanks.
Date: 4/27/2019 12:24:00 PM
- We often choose with heart, Vijay ... sensible, or not :) - A great poem, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/28/2019 8:03:00 AM
So true--thanks for your visit and comments Anne-Lise.
Date: 4/27/2019 9:21:00 AM
The heart feels such intense emotions and is tender, as opposed to a determined mind that wants to think logically - two great forces - a debate ever present between the two! a well penned, clever write. Poetry hugs, Jenny
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/27/2019 11:48:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your analysis..which, of course, is always spot on. Much appreciate..many thanks, Jennifer.
Date: 4/27/2019 8:12:00 AM
A truth very well stated my friend, Vijay! Unfortunately though, rarely the heart loses an argument! Lol!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/27/2019 11:46:00 AM
You are right my friend..much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks, Demetrios.
Date: 4/27/2019 12:42:00 AM
Truths expressed very briefly, but with decisive and pointed wisdom. Nice write, my friend.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/27/2019 11:44:00 AM
Many thanks my friend..much appreciate your kind feedback.
Date: 4/26/2019 11:42:00 PM
Emotions sometimes cloud better judgement. It is best to weigh all options, before making a decision. If you are following the heart when leaping- it is smart to use common sense as the parachute. ~ Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/27/2019 11:44:00 AM
Your analysis is on mark as always. Much appreciate your kind feedback..many thanks, Brandy.
Date: 4/26/2019 7:30:00 PM
Your thoughts are in fine shape Vijay...great verse to ponder my friend...^WW^...happy endings...{*J*}
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/27/2019 11:43:00 AM
Much appreciate my friend..many thanks.
Date: 4/26/2019 7:00:00 PM
Born to be free... or shattered...better mind over heart most of the times...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/27/2019 11:42:00 AM
Much appreciate your feedback Arturo..many thanks.
Date: 4/26/2019 6:45:00 PM
ohh the war between heart and logic is a never-ending process...this is a clever, splendid piece which i will take to heart, vijay!...huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/27/2019 11:42:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your kind remarks..many thanks, Nette.
Date: 4/26/2019 6:04:00 PM
I think it is an ever lasting struggle! The clutches of the mind versus a delicate heart! The mind is a fierce judge and leader, never stops arguing its way out.. Absolutely agree with your lovely verse, dear Vijay, though there are a few times when there is no harm to let the heart take the lead.. always a great pleasure to read your poetry. My deepest regards. Blessings.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/27/2019 11:41:00 AM
I agree with your analysis..you are always spot on. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Besma. Many thanks, as always.
Date: 4/26/2019 5:56:00 PM
Very interesting poem Vijay. Well done! It is worth keeping as a FAV to re-visit and think about again :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/27/2019 11:39:00 AM
Much appreciate your kind remarks Heidi. Special thanks for the FAVE.
Date: 4/26/2019 5:28:00 PM
Cute one. Got a chuckle here. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/27/2019 11:38:00 AM
Much appreciate your visit and comments..many thanks Sara.
Date: 4/26/2019 5:09:00 PM
I agree with Tom, this is most thought provoking, Vijay. Is it for any contest, perchance?
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/27/2019 11:38:00 AM
Many thanks Andrea..appreciate the kind remarks. I have entered it in Brian's contest..we will see if it goes anywhere.
Date: 4/26/2019 4:09:00 PM
So true Vijay, thought provoking verse. Tom
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/27/2019 11:35:00 AM
Much appreciate Tom..many thanks.

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