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With Unknown Aplomb

Me, I am thee, she naked Amidst bodies, I interject myself upon he With unknown aplomb, reaching sexual crescendo He now lies spent, taken to the limits orgasmically, by she, me, naked I . Syllables counted from 'The Free Dictionary' differing from the 'Soups'

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/2/2015 7:01:00 PM

James, Thank you for the sweet sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/20/2015 10:52:00 PM

JAMES, Congratulations on your awesome Fibonacci win :):):) Luv ~LINDA~

James Fraser
Date: 3/22/2015 7:17:00 AM

Thank you Linda, always appreciate a visit from you, James :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/17/2015 5:06:00 PM

Hot Stuff! Congrats on your 1st place win, James! Love, Kim

James Fraser
Date: 3/18/2015 5:33:00 PM

Thank you kindly Kim, hugs//James :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/17/2015 8:46:00 AM

An enjoyable thought! Congratulations on your win. Light & Love

James Fraser
Date: 3/18/2015 5:28:00 PM

Many thanks Debbie, nice to see my thoughts appreciated ;-) James :) :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/16/2015 2:19:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Passionate work..Sara

James Fraser
Date: 3/16/2015 5:08:00 PM

Many thanks Sara, much appreciated, James :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/16/2015 8:31:00 AM

I love how you weave sexuality in your writes, it is beautiful and raw. :)

James Fraser
Date: 3/16/2015 5:05:00 PM

Hiya Casarah, thanks kindly for your koolio comment, smiles, James :)

Skat A

Date: 3/15/2015 11:51:00 PM

JAMES, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Fibonacci WIN! ~SKAT

James Fraser
Date: 3/16/2015 5:01:00 PM

Many thanks SKAT, my first attempt, smiling :)

Skat A

Date: 3/15/2015 3:36:00 PM

you have a wonderful imagination...SKAT

James Fraser
Date: 3/16/2015 4:47:00 PM

Thank you for such a lovely compliment SKAT :)

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/15/2015 7:21:00 AM

Sensual...and you made it to the top once again! Congratulations on your win in the contest. Big Smiles, Dane Ann

James Fraser
Date: 3/15/2015 7:25:00 AM

Hiya Dane Ann, blessed Sunday to you. This is my first attempt at this form, and for it to be so recognised leaves me with Big Smiles. Nice to see you here, hugs//James :) :)

Paul Callus

Date: 3/15/2015 7:08:00 AM

Interesting method of expression, unusual, but the message is delivered all the same. Congratulations, James, on your top win! You are in good company, may I say!! // paul

James Fraser
Date: 3/15/2015 7:15:00 AM

Thank you kindly Paul, it's pure fiction Sir, just an imagination being allowed to wander. Yes indeed, I am in great company of which I'm humbled. Have a blessed Sunday, James..

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 3/15/2015 12:41:00 AM

Words so beautifully set,, creative write James! Congrats on top place win!

James Fraser
Date: 3/15/2015 11:38:00 AM

Many thanks Upma, my first attempt at this form, James :) :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 3/14/2015 10:45:00 PM

aha so Dino James your spill :D :P did great hahaha... I echo the comment I said earlier but may I add that am always lured by how you do your phrases and sentences... :) the classy way you did it like on the lines starting with amidst 'til the second to the last.. :)! I'm glad to share this same spot with you.. :) BIG CONGRATULATIONS!!!HEY HEY smay i say spill your ink again soon!;)//olive eloisa

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/16/2015 7:55:00 AM

Weeee why not let's try another collab perhaps? :)

James Fraser
Date: 3/15/2015 7:36:00 AM

Hiya Oliz, you may spill and share my ink as much as you so desire, for it leads to smiles by both. So looking forward to sharing our future poetry, for we bounce off each other with aplomb ;-) mega hugs//James xx

Jan Allison

Date: 3/14/2015 8:21:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats James:-) Hugs jan xx

James Fraser
Date: 3/15/2015 11:22:00 AM

Hiya Jan, many thanks as always, hugs//James xx

Rob Carmack

Date: 3/14/2015 8:12:00 PM

James, congrats on the win. Love the word orders.

James Fraser
Date: 3/15/2015 10:04:00 AM

Hi Rob, thank you kindly for honoring my poem so highly, it's very much appreciated. Happy Sunday to you, James :)

Kim Shaw

Date: 3/14/2015 7:28:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, James!! Hugs, Kimberly

James Fraser
Date: 3/15/2015 10:00:00 AM

Hiya Kimberly, thank you kindly for your kind words, hugs//James :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/14/2015 12:28:00 PM

Dear James, I'm not familiar with the form, but you always have a talent for writing very sensual poems. I can almost feel the "crescendo." So good to see your work again, my friend. I hope life is good to you now. Love, Carolyn

James Fraser
Date: 3/14/2015 1:09:00 PM

Hi Carolyn, it's not a form I'd tried before but I thought I'd give it a try. Thank you kindly for your always kind words. Presently, simply living quiet, in the meantime work keeps me busy which is good, hugs, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 3/13/2015 6:47:00 AM

Dino James, i was actually trying to figure all the pronouns James.. :D! but What I can say is the picture from your words is oozing hot and sultry!!!.. :) warm hugs.. //olive eloisa

James Fraser
Date: 3/14/2015 1:17:00 PM

Oh I'm sure to spill soon Oliz ;-)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/14/2015 8:23:00 AM

oh yes thoughts of the writer. :P spill it more.. :P!

James Fraser
Date: 3/13/2015 9:58:00 AM

My first attempt at this form. Glad you liked it Oliz, mmm, thoughts of the writer ;-) hugs aplenty, James xxxx