Water Lily

Weeping willow creeping there Amber light from melodic moon Take a fuchsia flower for hair Emerald embrace as love bloom Romantic rose petals on blanket Laid so beautifully Indigo kiss touches silver soul passion strategically Like lily floating in the lake Your love does the same to me

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Joseph May

Date: 8/15/2024 7:02:00 PM

Very nicely penned Karen, enjoyed

Karen Jones
Date: 8/15/2024 8:59:00 PM

Thanks Joe!

Duke Beaufort

Date: 8/10/2024 11:55:00 AM

Karen, this has a subtle poetic quality that makes it all work really well. Smiles!!

Karen Jones
Date: 8/10/2024 12:14:00 PM

Glad you like it! Hugs

I Am Anaya

Date: 8/8/2024 8:25:00 PM

It feels like a treasure chest filled with goodies, a beautiful state of mind to be in, Karen. This is lovejoy! xo

Karen Jones
Date: 8/8/2024 8:43:00 PM

Hugs Anaya!

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/8/2024 4:26:00 AM

So romantic and beautifully crafted Karen! I really enjoyed reading it this morning!! Happy Thursday !!

Karen Jones
Date: 8/8/2024 6:11:00 AM

Happy Thursday and thanks Mike!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 8/7/2024 8:20:00 PM

This is a beautiful poem. I like the comparison between the lily and his love.

Karen Jones
Date: 8/8/2024 12:24:00 AM

Hilda thank you for reading so many of my poems!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/7/2024 3:20:00 PM

what a delight to read karen! hugs jan xx

Karen Jones
Date: 8/7/2024 4:28:00 PM

Thanks Jan!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/7/2024 12:06:00 PM

this is so lovely, Karen. Great job.

Karen Jones
Date: 8/7/2024 12:16:00 PM

Aw you are kind thanks Andrea!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/7/2024 8:36:00 AM

A brilliant acrostic. I love water lilies though you won;t many in Malta.

Karen Jones
Date: 8/7/2024 9:31:00 AM

Thanks Victor!

Silent One

Date: 8/7/2024 2:51:00 AM

Sweet analogy.. nice acrostic and arrangement of words..

Karen Jones
Date: 8/7/2024 3:26:00 AM

Thanks Silent One!

Chantelle Cooke

Date: 8/7/2024 12:44:00 AM

Oh my goodness Karen this is a Fav for me. I could read this every day! There's so much to comment on...I don't know where to begin. I do know that every time I read this masterpiece I will be filled with new emotions and imagery! Well done my friend! Blessings Chantelle

Karen Jones
Date: 8/7/2024 1:27:00 AM

Chantelle I am honored you fav it! Thanks for your kind comments!

Valsa George

Date: 8/6/2024 9:45:00 PM

Beautiful analogy between love and water lily floating in the lake. Let love bloom.

Karen Jones
Date: 8/6/2024 11:11:00 PM

Thanks Valsa for reading.