Water Colour

streaks as autumn bleeds the leaves painted on sidewalks~ abstract underfoot 11/9/2020 5/7/5 how many syllables.

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Kevin Lawrence

Date: 3/16/2023 2:14:00 PM

You're still my favorite. Thank you, for your marvelous words and imagination. Kev

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/17/2023 6:48:00 AM

I can’t thank you enough Kevin, that means the world to me. I forgot I could write like this. xomo

Kevin Lawrence

Date: 3/16/2023 2:11:00 PM

You're still my favorite. Thank you.??

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 12/8/2020 7:56:00 AM

Great Imagery! Congrats on your win

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 12/9/2020 7:24:00 AM

Thank you Paghunda! xomo

Mark Koplin

Date: 12/4/2020 8:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! Beautiful

Jan Allison

Date: 11/20/2020 7:26:00 AM

I missed this gem before Mo, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/19/2020 3:43:00 PM

- Congratulations on your wonderful haiku, Maureen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 11/19/2020 1:36:00 PM

Maureen, congratulations on your silver placement with your beautiful haiku!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/18/2020 6:05:00 AM

Great imagery, Maureen. xovb ~~

Laura Leiser

Date: 11/10/2020 2:58:00 PM

You are the master of short poetry, Maureen! This beauty is perfect...great imagery! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/10/2020 7:55:00 AM

The leaves are falling, falling, falling. Most here are just parchment brown this year. Your work is so colorful. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara