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Unrequited Love

I see her every day but she'll never know How my heart pounds as I watch her go I doubt she even knows that I exist But the pain in my heart will always persist. I can see he makes her happy, that makes me happy too Now I know my heart forgives me for what I put it through. How I’ve longed to talk to her, but she’s never noticed me She acts like I’m invisible so I guess that she can’t see From the moment I saw her I’ve been in love from afar Write her tender love songs, strum them on my guitar I see her constantly but I guess she’ll never know She’s the girl of my dreams and how I love her so 31st August

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Sandra Haight

Date: 9/15/2015 3:12:00 PM

Such a sweet, romantic collaboration, Jadazzle! Congrats on your nice win

Skat A

Date: 9/14/2015 12:56:00 PM

Jadazzle, Congratulations on your win, SKAT

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/12/2015 7:18:00 AM

Wow great write Jad! Congrats on big win!

Jadazzle United
Date: 9/13/2015 4:21:00 PM

Thanks so much Dr Sharma guess this is a subject many of us can relate to at some time in our lives:-( hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/11/2015 9:15:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this wistful write, Jadazzle! Love, Kim

Jadazzle United
Date: 9/13/2015 4:21:00 PM

Thanks so much Kim - i adore writing with Darren the verses simply flow with no alteration at all:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Van Breda

Date: 9/9/2015 9:40:00 PM

Lucky girl of your dreams to have such wonderful words penned about her. Cool write ~~X~~

Jadazzle United
Date: 9/11/2015 4:52:00 PM

I guess many have all experienced this in their life - i know I have:-( hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/31/2015 2:40:00 PM

Ahh!! Romantic collaboration..I enjyoyed reading this one today..Thanks for dropping by..Sara

Jadazzle United
Date: 8/31/2015 2:50:00 PM

Thanks for visiting us Sara:-) hugs jan :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/31/2015 9:00:00 AM

this is sweet and is exactly unrequited love. FAbulous to see you two dazzling us again!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/31/2015 9:31:00 AM

The magic is still there when we write Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

DM Babbit

Date: 8/30/2015 5:03:00 PM

Been there, done that - you sent me back in time.

Jadazzle United
Date: 8/30/2015 5:19:00 PM

I'm sorry DM I guess many can relate to our words:-( hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 8/30/2015 5:00:00 PM

Well done Jan and Daz....Sing the songs loudly and she will hear.

Jadazzle United
Date: 8/30/2015 5:18:00 PM

Do you think so Tim? Hugs jan xx

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 8/30/2015 4:40:00 PM

Totally agrees with Bev. Its hard to watch someone that you love with someone else and not be able to say the love

Jadazzle United
Date: 8/30/2015 5:17:00 PM

Darren and I have never met but out words flow - we don't discuss a theme - one of us comes up with the first verse the rest of the poem just follows without a word being changed:-) Hugs Jan xx