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Two Hats Lost

Two hats lost in a desert felt so much dread For unable to walk, they had to hop instead Soon with a ragged rim One hat cried, "It looks dim!" The other said, "Wait, and I'll go on ahead!"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 9/6/2019 7:18:00 AM
Ha ha, head over heals is the way to go.
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Pat Adams
Date: 9/6/2019 5:16:00 PM
That's what I always say sometimes!!!....80)
Date: 9/2/2019 10:20:00 PM
G'day Pat … dare I say it, but you've done it again - well done Pat - Lindsay
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Date: 9/3/2019 7:16:00 AM
Thanks a lot Lindsay!..........80)
Date: 9/1/2019 3:41:00 AM
Nice one Pat...great idea...
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Pat Adams
Date: 9/1/2019 12:18:00 PM
Thanks Arturo!!......80)
Date: 8/30/2019 3:06:00 PM
I love the picture! But I adore your wit! I mean, really now, all I can do is shake my head and grin.
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Date: 8/30/2019 3:31:00 PM
Your comments turn my legs to Jello, but for now, I'll say good bye hello!........(Thanks!).....pat
Date: 8/29/2019 5:03:00 PM
I would be interested to know what came first. The picture or the poem. Have a great day my friend.
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Date: 8/30/2019 7:15:00 AM
The poem. I couldn't find a picture with 2 hats, so I guess this is after the first 1 left?!.........80)
Date: 8/29/2019 4:46:00 PM
fabulous word play you made me lol Pat:-) hugs Jan xx
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Pat Adams
Date: 8/30/2019 7:14:00 AM
Thanks Jan!..............80)

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