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Tickles and Pickles

There was a girl who loved salty pickles She'd stick in a fork for a sure tickle The first bite would spirt She'd give the dork a squirt Pickle juice in the eyes, such a giggle!

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/17/2010 10:37:00 AM

Doris, Very late on my congratulations,, Shame on em.. better late than never. Had fun reading all entries.. CONGRATULTIONS once again... always,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2010 9:07:00 PM

very cute one, Doris. Congratulations!

James Fraser

Date: 11/15/2010 1:33:00 PM

Congratulations Doris on your fine win in pd's contest >> James :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/15/2010 10:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Doris in P D's contest "Pickles & Tickles *Limerick*". Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 11/15/2010 9:18:00 AM

Very good one Doris, humorous! Congratulations on your worthy poem's place. Agape, Moses

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 11/15/2010 7:35:00 AM

This is so true, Doris. I have to be sure to get the small pickles so the entire thing gets in before I have juice in my eyes. Great write. Congrats on your win. Dan C

Tahera Mannan

Date: 11/14/2010 8:53:00 PM

Hahaha. Lovely one Doris. Many congratulations for this win.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/14/2010 11:31:00 AM

sixth place win...eureka!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/14/2010 7:56:00 AM

Congrats Doris on your big win in P.D.'s contest with this wonderful and terrific write for your Limerick entry... enjoy sweet victory this happy Sunday with lots of luv my friend.. hope all is well...and happy..too..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/14/2010 6:26:00 AM

Congrats.Mom

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/14/2010 4:42:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win, Doris

Gert W. Knop

Date: 10/24/2010 7:38:00 AM

That must have hurt her, Doris! Cute Limerick, enjoyed the read this afternoon! You should have tasted my cheesetart with whipped cream and cranberries and a baked dough (not a crumbled one and with curd not with philadelphia fresh cheese). When living in Papua Newu Guinea we also prepared the one which is not baked but kept in the fridge. So the one I prepared for my guests would have even tasted you!...Have a great week!...Gert

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/21/2010 10:30:00 AM

Ouch that sour pickle would sting the eye. Cute one Doris. God Bless Phyl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/21/2010 7:31:00 AM

Cute Limerick..May you win first place with this one..Mom

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/21/2010 7:17:00 AM

Wonderful write and a winning entry for the contest, Doris

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/21/2010 7:13:00 AM

Ouch, that juice had to burn, Doris. Very cute limerick. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/21/2010 7:04:00 AM

cute and funny today Doris.. good luck in the contest... but u must change your title to reflect the contest name of Pickles and Tickles luv or be disqualified according to blog rules by sponsor.. a great way to begin my laundry day...

Bidyut Bikash Brahma

Date: 10/21/2010 6:36:00 AM

enjoyed your poem.