This Morning At February End

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As the apricot sun rises, In the hollow creek rise flows like fog Biting cold surrounds me Shivering happens from my toes up The warmth of the house's interior Invites me to come in Even though duty awaits the housewife A day of ordinary begins

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Howard Kerr

Date: 3/6/2025 6:01:00 PM

Hi Sara Thank you so very much for your reflections on Mirror On Eros. This work of yours is very atmospheric with divine scene capture. Precise description of morning weather Howard

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/7/2025 5:42:00 AM

Thank you, Howard. I can only write about what touches my life. We write what we know. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2025 11:12:00 AM

I really like this. Nothing like the comfort of home

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/23/2025 4:15:00 PM

Got that right, Andrea. No matter how humble there is no place like home. Thanks for your kindness. Sara K

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/23/2025 9:31:00 AM

a beautiful kind of ordinary this one , sara...i like how ciear and vigorous your imagery is...huggs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/23/2025 4:14:00 PM

Thank you, Nette. Your comments are always appreciated and so uplifting. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/23/2025 5:46:00 AM

Beautiful description. Lovely picture.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/23/2025 7:32:00 AM

Thank you, Victor. Outside as the sun was rising to let the dog out. Freezing my toes and hands off. Sara K