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This Cave Is Mined

Surrounded by the Bay of Conception Bell Island anchored for miles perception Deep deep under the mine that was drudged Remnants of rail blind horses that tugged Not the mainland but off Canada's shore The iron ore mines that are no more Deep in the ground of old Newfoundland To far the ore that made it grand No longer the mine that prosperity gave But a wondrous long mysterious cave The pumps are off the water it fills Divers around go diving for thrills With caution it's done for there is a list Many dead miners it does exist Even though the mine is gone I've heard some divers have move on Now some would say there is a ghost It might be fearful scary to most Maybe some spirit or even a fairy This one could be an old Canterbury None the less men will explore That is how we got the ore So once again you go down under Miles of caves and all its wonder Fulfill your quest a bucket list Check it off and dive the mist Follow the rope and stay the course Find the shoe of the old black horse Search you will with flipper and light To plunder a relic you'll feel the smite Of an old ghost miner with pick and shovel He'll take it back that item you smuggle So resist the urge to pillage and plunder We can't get out from so far under Take our tools you'll leave us bare So put them down or else beware Of the old ghost miners protecting this place We once lived and ran life's race We are no more to cross the Bay Make the ferry at the end of the day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/5/2016 10:26:00 AM
Very nicely penned ...
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Ronald Kent
Date: 8/5/2016 11:56:00 AM
thanks for stopping by to read.
Date: 8/3/2016 7:17:00 PM
I was unaware of this part of our history. I originally came from Northern Ontario where they still mine Gold. The towns prosperity and fortunes have gone up and down with the price of gold and the technology to extract it. Mining towns have their own rugged charm.
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Ronald Kent
Date: 8/3/2016 8:23:00 PM
When the mines close that is when the tourism kicks in
Date: 8/3/2016 2:31:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this one..If for a contest, it reads like a winner to me..It has good flow and rhyme..Welcome to soup..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Ronald Kent
Date: 8/3/2016 4:18:00 PM
Thank you Sara, your comments are well received.
Date: 8/3/2016 11:48:00 AM
The caves sound too claustrophobic and ghost filled for me, but your cave poem was filled with flowing, sweet rhyme composing an entertaining and interesting tale. I truly enjoyed your write ... CayCay
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Ronald Kent
Date: 8/3/2016 8:24:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by to read.
Date: 8/3/2016 6:34:00 AM
there are so many fascinating things in this world I will never personally see or even know about. this is one of them. Well told!
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Ronald Kent
Date: 8/3/2016 6:42:00 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 8/2/2016 7:56:00 AM
I remember back in 1976-1977 when I worked as an engineer assistant in Port Cartier's Iron-ore mine in Quebec. It was quite an experience. Winter's temperatures minus 40-45 Celsius. Very well written dear Ronald. One must have some experience in order to understand!
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Ronald Kent
Date: 8/2/2016 9:16:00 AM
I did some work for Canada Steamship Lines and if you think it's cold on the dock one should stand on the deck of the ship, in those temps. Cold steel, frozen faces keep on moving if you want 'a go places. thank you for commenting.
Date: 8/2/2016 5:55:00 AM
Lovely storytelling Ronald - am sure their ghosts and spirits will live on:-) Like your take on the caves theme good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/1/2016 5:16:00 PM
I love the poetic flow and storytelling nature of your fine poem, Ronald! Good luck in the contest :)
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Ronald Kent
Date: 8/1/2016 5:25:00 PM
Thank you Laura, your comments are well appreciated.
Date: 8/1/2016 5:03:00 PM
there always remains ghosts were peoples lifes are cut short excellent piece of writing ronald
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Ronald Kent
Date: 8/1/2016 5:24:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by to read and comment.
Date: 8/1/2016 4:45:00 PM
Wonderful piece, much enjoyed
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Ronald Kent
Date: 8/1/2016 5:20:00 PM
Thanks Mike, glad you liked it.
Date: 8/1/2016 9:21:00 AM
nicely penned Ronald,liked this with good rhyme too, blessings, Gordon
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Ronald Kent
Date: 8/1/2016 9:56:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by and commenting Gordon.
Date: 7/31/2016 7:24:00 PM
Interesting poem about the history of mining days in Newfoundland!:)
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Ronald Kent
Date: 7/31/2016 8:41:00 PM
Happy you like that one and thanks for commenting.

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