The Cave

When I entered the cave i met with darkness of the devil's wrath

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Jan Allison

Date: 8/27/2016 7:42:00 AM

A very deep poem Honesty:-) hugs Jan xx

Debbie Duncan

Date: 4/7/2013 6:29:00 PM

Oh, I like this, very nice ;} thank you 4 reading remember us, my mom and dad had good memories, so I hope I do too ;}

Carol Fillmore

Date: 2/8/2011 9:34:00 AM

This is wonderful, excellent write! Thanks Honesty for your comment on my poem! much appreciated:)

Fabiyas M V

Date: 1/9/2011 2:23:00 AM

Nice imagery of 'cave',Honesty.Sweet haiku

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/6/2011 6:28:00 AM

That would be a scary place for sure...I am glad that I chose this one to read this morning..Your presence at my work lifted my spirits..Sara

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/5/2010 9:42:00 AM

Interesting haiku Honesty, really enjoyed it!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/4/2010 11:21:00 PM

oooh, good one, honesty. Let me know this cave so I can avoid it (I dreamed of the devil once, a very scary dream!!!)