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The Accident

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Death only a few inches away But Jeb just wanted to play He bent over an inch too much Breathed in H2O and such Woke up in a place he didn't want to stay

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John Read

Date: 10/6/2024 2:17:00 AM

Jeb was lucky to still be alive, Without thinking he took a dive, he woke up in bed, with a lump on his head, a broken nose and two lovely black eyes.

John Read
Date: 10/6/2024 6:04:00 AM

No I didn't know there was one to tell you the truth.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/6/2024 3:28:00 AM

Good one, John. Did you enter the contest? Thanks for the visit. Poor Jeb, no matter how you look at it. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/10/2024 1:39:00 PM

Great job for the limerick contest, Sara. Good luck.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/11/2024 2:44:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. Well, it is not a great creative idea, but it is something. LOL..Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/9/2024 8:58:00 PM

ohh that was close call for jeb, sara...humor becomes you, lol! blessings

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/10/2024 5:21:00 AM

Thank you, Nette. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Duke Beaufort

Date: 8/9/2024 7:30:00 PM

Sara, I hope it was a hospital bed and not a morgue! Pools can be dangerous for sure. I don't have one and never will.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/10/2024 5:21:00 AM

Duke, it was for a contest. I could not copy her picture because it was too large, so I had to find one. Just made-up limerick from the picture on the contest page. However, pools are very dangerous, and everyone should obey the rules so that there is less danger of drownings. Sara K

Gary Radice

Date: 8/9/2024 1:35:00 PM

It’s been a while since I looked in on a Sara Kendrick poem so..here I am. You’ve served up a limerick with a lesson and a good one too. Have a nice weekend. Cheers - Gary

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/9/2024 1:51:00 PM

Why, thank you, Gary for dropping by. I appreciate your visit and the nice review of my work. Sara K

Valsa George

Date: 8/9/2024 9:28:00 AM

A great limerick on Jeb who went to the extreme level of risking his own life by bending too low into the water. Thank God, he was not drowned ! Playing too much with water is as dangerous as playing with fire. A real fun read, dear Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/9/2024 10:39:00 AM

Yes, it can be a life-or-death situation, Valsa. Your visits are appreciated. Sara K

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/9/2024 8:31:00 AM

Yikes, he's lucky to be alive. Enjoy your weekend Sara. Tom

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/9/2024 10:38:00 AM

He does seem from the picture that he is in real trouble. LOL..Thanks for the visit, Tom. Your time spent here is appreciated. Sara K