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Teens Caught In Headlights

dusk’s love-locked braces — dad resounds shooting antler off bucks to detach
 1/13/2021 Senryu - Humorous, Satirical or Dark Poetry Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/16/2021 7:32:00 PM
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Wonderful write. Congratulations on your win Kim.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 1/15/2021 5:29:00 AM
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Love it Kim, Congrats on your win!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/15/2021 5:24:00 PM
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Thank you, Mark!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/15/2021 3:41:00 AM
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:))) ... well done, Kim :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/15/2021 3:46:00 AM
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Thank you, sweet, lady!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/14/2021 6:59:00 PM
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ouch ~ vivid. well done, Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/15/2021 3:46:00 AM
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Thanks, Line!
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/14/2021 4:02:00 PM
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Dropping back with many congrats Kim this was one of my personal favourites:-) hugs jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2021 5:07:00 PM
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Thank you so much! Hugs, Jan!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/14/2021 1:22:00 PM
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cute humor, Kim. congrats.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2021 5:07:00 PM
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Thank you, Andrea!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 1/14/2021 12:41:00 PM
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Time to get out of town, so visually hilarious Kim, congratulations on win cheers David
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2021 5:08:00 PM
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Thank you, David!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/14/2021 12:16:00 PM
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Kim, congratulations on your winning placement with your funny poem!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2021 5:08:00 PM
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Thank you, Tania!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/13/2021 3:48:00 PM
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Ha, ha, Hilarious!! A good laugh to be had by all readers! Thanks, Kim! ~ gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/13/2021 5:37:00 PM
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Thanks! So glad you enjoyed the humor!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/13/2021 2:44:00 PM
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I got a really good laugh out of this one Kim! Many thanks! Linda
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/13/2021 3:36:00 PM
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So glad...lol!
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 1/13/2021 1:25:00 PM
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Caught in the act? ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/13/2021 3:37:00 PM
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Up to your imagination;)
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2021 5:37:00 AM
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ha ha ha this is priceless and the title is superb just love it Kim!!! so the young buck then scarpers lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/13/2021 5:52:00 AM
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I would think so...lol!

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