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Tea Time Poetry Contest Sponsored by Natasha L Scragg

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I once had thirty nine brothers and sisters now I’m all alone in the world Probing fingers viciously tore me apart from my twin. My white dress is speckled with dark dust… it’s all that remains of my siblings. I was tossed back into my carboard box home and left in solitary confinement I know my days are numbered as my captor mercilessly dips her hand in and grabs me. I do not struggle as she pulls me out but I can hear a hiss and see a steaming monster I’m popped into a pretty bone china container It’s lovely and warm, I feel quite relieved Until my captor says to me, “Gran always said I should warm the teapot first” Then the stark reality of my fate smacks me in the face All of a sudden the floral china lid is raised My captor is standing in front of me I see the steaming monster towering over me Now I know the fate of my relations … they were all boiled alive!

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Date: 2/10/2024 6:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your "Tea Time" write. I enjoyed reading your creative /fun story with the pretty picture. Have a blessed day with a cup of tea.............
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Date: 2/8/2024 9:43:00 AM
- Well deserve a top spot on the list, Jan ... congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 1/22/2024 3:25:00 PM
Funny to take the point of view of different object and things we deal with for our own pleasure. There's food for thought in all of this!
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Date: 1/20/2024 3:50:00 AM
I love your take on the contest, Jan. The last live was a definite killer, literally-(lol) Best wishes in the contest. Hugs Charlie x
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Date: 1/19/2024 6:09:00 AM
A delightful offering of humorous (and sad) personification, Jan. ~ I still have a couple of cups from my grandmother's teaset, slightly cracked but otherwise so beautiful; glad I saved them extinction! ~Hugs // paul
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Date: 1/19/2024 3:06:00 PM
Thanks so much Paul, it certainly was fun to write. the tea cups sound like family heirlooms - precious memories even though they are no longer pristine:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/19/2024 4:12:00 AM
So creative. Non parallel. I am charmed. Love.
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Date: 1/19/2024 5:48:00 AM
thanks so much Anisha:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 1/19/2024 2:29:00 AM
I love the way you combine images with such precision. Hugs.
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Date: 1/19/2024 5:47:00 AM
thanks so much Victor:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 1/18/2024 7:16:00 PM
A very creative perspective Jan, Well done, hugs
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Date: 1/19/2024 5:47:00 AM
Thanks Joseph, not sure if its what the sponsor is after but it was fun to write from the teabag's perspective lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/18/2024 3:58:00 PM
Om y goodness ! this is too cute, where do you get them Jan, :) gl in the contest dear friend
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Date: 1/18/2024 4:47:00 PM
Goodness knows where it comes from Vie lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 1/17/2024 2:09:00 PM
Lol. It's a winner. I love it. Poor teabag.
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Date: 1/18/2024 12:15:00 PM
thanks so much Hilda, not sure if i've thought too much out of the box for the tea contest lol:-) :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/17/2024 11:16:00 AM
Forty tea bags in a box. At first, I thought you were a sugar cube. Boiled alive like a lobster! Good fun at the end, and quite charming throughout.
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Date: 1/18/2024 12:14:00 PM
we actually buy bigger boxes maybe 80 or 160 but they are joined together in twos so I thought 'out of the box; for this contest lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/17/2024 9:36:00 AM
Oh dear, Jan! Well done! The story is filled with suspense and a great array of feelings! Will never look at my tea bags in the same light again!!! Maybe I'll gently warm the pot from now on! Health and happiness to you in 2024.
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Date: 1/18/2024 12:13:00 PM
Lol yes Sam, gently warm the pot and maybe use single tea bags in the sleeves with the string on them lol:-) :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/17/2024 7:40:00 AM
You did a great job on keeping me guessing on this one, Jan.
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Date: 1/18/2024 12:13:00 PM
Thanks so much for dropping by Mark:-) :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/17/2024 6:21:00 AM
Ha haa - as a Brit (guilty as charged) not only do I love the humour and drama in this; the perspective is genius. Fabulous, Jan
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Date: 1/18/2024 12:12:00 PM
Thanks Sam, I love my tea, we have the boxes where the teabags come in twos so i imagined them being torn apart and went on from the:-) hugs Jan xx

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