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M o o n is a rose quartz pearl, unraveling midnight musings, glazed in citrine dust of dancing diamonds. And I am but a mere poet in awe, weaving love from silver syllables of her sparkling halo…. Let’s talk tonight in moon language, only we can strap the stars that seem reluctant to shine, as our love beams brighter than billion flickers of red diamonds adorned across the Persian Lily skies. I see our n a m e s engraved in golden caviar lines, reflecting mulberry m e m o r i e s sedately upon seas that flow so calm. Take my heart, place your thoughts within my soul, listen to me inhale your husky whispers deeper than you can deny, whilst you bloom like an everlasting dahlia, d r i f t i n g into an eloquently woven aura. Let’s sing to the flaming petals, swerving along stellar waves tonight, awakening the fire that burns so silently, from a distant planet, turning reality into an ethereal era of mythical mysteries. Maybe midnight angels may reveal our enchantments within crystalline clouds, Maybe silken wind wouldn’t surrender to secrets hidden beneath periwinkle pigments. So don’t ignore the fizzled sparklers, emanating through these e s o t e r i c eyes, let it be the turquoise truth, you’ll worship in hyacinth hymns tonight, as we unleash violet verses across valleys of vintage romance, to reignite our desires beneath the sterling Luna, there our sighs will r i s e high into the mightiest s k y of sapphires wrapped in fragrant spring delight. Maybe we are eternally entwined by stardust that runs through our veins, and cosmos that fill two beating hearts as they become one.. like bleeding fine merlot wine that will taste sweeter with t i m e In delicate arms of twilight strings of stars sail in silvery cadence a moonscape of diamond dreams

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Date: 3/7/2024 6:16:00 PM
IE, you've elevated the expectation for communication to a high standard. I know my wife sometimes gets annoyed at me or I at her when we speak bluntly. It's tough to always be kind and gentle when communicating but it is a worthy goal indeed.
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Date: 2/29/2024 9:18:00 AM
Dear Empress, expressive poetess, your vivid imagery and rich metaphors are both ethereal and real. An intimate poetic outpouring of love, longing, hope, passion and eternal entwining that is magical, dreamy and suave, seducing my heart's imagination. "Let’s talk tonight/in moon language" and "unleash/violet verses/across valleys of/vintage romance" -ah! So beautiful and filled with a fever of emotion! Congratulations for your win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 2/26/2024 8:56:00 PM
Ah! A poem after my own heart. I love the expression, the flow, and the style. In short, too good. Congratulations, and many blessings.
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Date: 2/24/2024 11:19:00 PM
If I were to assess this poem it would take me too long. So many ingredients: love, imagery, emotions, sublime thoughts. Enough said: a masterpiece.
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Date: 2/25/2024 12:10:00 AM
Thank you victor i appreciate you reading always
Date: 2/24/2024 9:31:00 PM
I agree with Paige. Simply gorgeous
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Date: 2/25/2024 12:13:00 AM
Ah i always appreciate your feedback truly andrea thank you so much
Date: 2/24/2024 3:22:00 PM
Gorgeous writing, so enchanting and powerful
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Date: 2/25/2024 12:15:00 AM
Awn thank you sweet soul
Date: 2/24/2024 12:04:00 PM
Who is not talking to you and why not? lol... This is very creative and imaginative, I think Brian will love it... The imagery and language is as always rich in imagery, so vivid.. Phrases like "moon language," "silver syllables," and "dancing diamonds" create a sense of magic and wonder... I immerse myself in your words like the moon in a night sky.... I like how it explores timeless themes of love, longing, and connection. The lovers' dialogue in "moon language" and their shared moments of intimacy beneath the celestial canopy evoke a sense of passion and devotion that transcends earthly boundaries. BOL in contest, homie..
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Date: 2/25/2024 12:21:00 AM
Thanks homie! I guess we never know lol. My poem maybe not a winner but i still appreciate your feedback thank you so much
Date: 2/24/2024 10:30:00 AM
It's so nice that the theme of love is kept afloat, "of red diamonds adorned across the Persian Lily skies." Its must be so beautiful and romantic there, I miss the word Persian, it's such a pretty word--and Farci a poetic language. Hugs, Empress ~Anaya
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Date: 2/25/2024 12:23:00 AM
Yes i find it so romantic too farci. Ah you know it dear anaya. Always a pleasure hearing from you
Date: 2/24/2024 5:36:00 AM
Beautiful luv poetry Inky. I don't know if you have someone but if so please read this to him. Which brings up a great idea... you should post an occasional audio. We'd love to hear your voice
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Date: 2/25/2024 12:25:00 AM
Poor thing yes listens to me readin poetry sometimes lol. I did previously read for someone who was a friend on insta : later turned into a hater. Lol it must be there still on her page my spoken word: its always good to have you leave your feedback. . Hope you are doing well
Date: 2/24/2024 4:37:00 AM
Awesome write pleasure reading your work here. Blessings
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Date: 2/25/2024 12:26:00 AM
Thank you so very much for your blessings and poetic presence
Date: 2/23/2024 10:14:00 PM
I enjoyed the romantic flavors of this poem. The moon seems to be a watchful guardian that showers love from above. Verses are beautiful.
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Date: 2/25/2024 12:48:00 AM
Awn dear hilda you are always so generous with your feedback and kindness. Im truly grateful for your support
Date: 2/23/2024 5:51:00 PM
I like how you "weave love from silver syllables of her sparkling halo", Great write empress
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Date: 2/25/2024 12:37:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear joseph. Always grateful for your sincere support
Date: 2/23/2024 1:41:00 PM
Ink, beautifully penned and a terrific layout, very inspiring, well done, a FAV, hugs, Constance
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Date: 2/25/2024 1:02:00 AM
Ah that means alot thank you so much dear constance for the fave and your thoughtful comment
Date: 2/23/2024 12:14:00 PM
Delightfully reminiscing in love, your poem is a heartfelt verse of romance. Charming words adorn your vocabulary, my friend--as splendor of love echoes--igniting passion. Excellent, as always, Ink.
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Date: 2/25/2024 1:16:00 AM
Thank you so very much always for being so supportive i am grateful for your kindness
Date: 2/23/2024 11:42:00 AM
Oh, Dearest Ink, what an excellent piece of poetry! Your work vividly depicts the ethereal beauty of love, reminiscent of moonbeams casting their enchanting glow upon a pristine nocturnal sky in each verse and vibrant hue. Love's beauty pervades every verse, vivid depiction, and vibrant hue of your creation. I was drawn into its orbit, mesmerized by its radiant beauty and deep profundity. You have an incredible ability to capture the essence of love and connection, infusing your words with a soul-stirring intensity. You have the power of language to transcend the mundane and connect with the sacred.
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Date: 2/25/2024 2:15:00 AM
Ah im so grateful for your poetic presence and support alwYs dr sotto thank you so much truly
Date: 2/23/2024 10:42:00 AM
Hi Inky! The pure grace of romance is entwined in every line, every image and every color of your poem like the hand of moonbeams sprinkling exquisite moonlight on a clear night! Love the shape poem at the end. Your creativity is dynamic and energized! So enjoyed this escape into a romantic interlude! Best wishes if this is for a contest. Blessings of moonlight and melody to you! Samszy!
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Date: 2/25/2024 4:41:00 AM
Ah samszy, its always so good to hear from you, you always are so mindful and so sincere with your feedback. For which i am truly grateful! Thank you so very much for visiting me and for leaving you heartfelt comment. You truly are a gem
Date: 2/23/2024 8:59:00 AM
Lots of descriptive lines penned. Thanks for sharing it with us. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara K
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Date: 2/25/2024 11:26:00 AM
Thank you sara always
Date: 2/23/2024 7:51:00 AM
Dear Ink Empress, Your poem, as always, swept me away into a realm of celestial beauty and profound emotion. Your words are not mere lines on a page; they are constellations of feeling, galaxies of longing, and supernovas of passion. The imagery within your words is breathtaking, like a midnight sky adorned with the rarest jewels. You create a world of love and longing, where each syllable is a thread connecting hearts across the cosmos. As I read your poem, I felt myself drawn into its orbit, mesmerized by its luminous beauty and profound depth. Your ability to capture the essence of love and connection is truly remarkable, and your words are filled with a soul-stirring intensity. You have the power of language to transcend the ordinary and touch the divine. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 2/25/2024 11:28:00 AM
Dear daniel your comments are as poetic and as deep as your poetry. Thank you so very much truly for the indepth analysis and how youv described and placed my poetry as something that would touch the divine is truly something il appreciate you for saying . Thank you so much
Date: 2/23/2024 7:18:00 AM
a rose quartz pearl!! unraveling midnight musings,glazed in citrine dust!!! Mmmm cnt stopping looking away papi!!! Wow this opening is damn stroooong!! Let’s talk tonight in moon language, ur romance is just soo breathtaking!!! listen to me inhale .. ok now u making me feel some butterflies!! eternally entwined by stardust that runs through our veins, mmm u r my veins!! Effortless flow n exciting alliterations… papi you bringing in all the big guns.n I am head over heels for this heavenly piece!
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Date: 2/23/2024 6:15:00 AM
Wow nice poem
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Date: 2/23/2024 7:04:00 AM
Inspired by the moon tonight so beautiful

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