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early morning sun a brand new day is dawning hear the cockerel crow sun beams from heaven with uplifting mellowness they brighten up our world scorching hot sunshine summer has arrived at last eat cooling ice cream cones beautiful sunset spectacular orange sky soon darkness will descend (N contest rule 5 7 5 haiku with one additional word) Contest Split Haiku Sponsored by Mystic Rose 04~03~16

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/6/2016 9:50:00 PM

Jan, Congratulations on your "MYSTICS SPLIT HAIKU win." ~LINDA~

Jan Allison
Date: 4/6/2016 9:53:00 PM

Thanks so much Linda:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 4/6/2016 3:17:00 PM

I feel as though I spent a bright sunny day with you and now it's dusk. Well done and congrats, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/6/2016 3:46:00 PM

Many thanks Lin that was what I what trying to portray sunrise to sunset:-) hugs jan xx

Dineen Williams Gault

Date: 4/6/2016 7:37:00 AM

Your imagery is stunning, beautifully painted haiku! Congratulations!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/6/2016 7:38:00 AM

Thanks so much Dineen:-) hugs Jan xx

Balveen Cheema

Date: 4/6/2016 5:41:00 AM

Jan, your haikus are superb! Congrats!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/6/2016 5:48:00 AM

aww thanks Balveen I just try my best and hope people like it:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/6/2016 2:10:00 AM

Congrats on a worthy win with these superb haikus Jan..

Jan Allison
Date: 4/6/2016 4:52:00 AM

Many thanks Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 4/5/2016 5:37:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on your win. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 4/5/2016 5:38:00 PM

Many thanks Eve I was delighted to place:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2016 5:32:00 PM

I'm so glad this got on the list. WEll deserved win, my friend. You and I were on the same wave length here.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/5/2016 5:35:00 PM

Thanks Andrea I was absolutely delighted to place in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/5/2016 5:07:00 PM

Wonderful imagery, Jan. Congratulations on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 4/5/2016 5:08:00 PM

Thanks so much Sandra I am just reading the winning poems and they are delightful:-) hugs Jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 4/5/2016 5:01:00 PM

Jan a wonderful split haiku! congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Jan Allison
Date: 4/5/2016 5:02:00 PM

Thanks LuLoo I am delighted the poem will get more widely read:-) hugs Jan xx

Vladislav Raven

Date: 4/4/2016 7:12:00 PM

Hi Jan, well i felt i needed a Haiku this morning so hear i am. I wanted to stop by your work so i thought i would look for one, i didn't have to look too hard and what a wonder my eyes behold. This is a brilliant Haiku Jan. From start to finish it holds together strongly. The words sing into my mind and the imagery that comes from them is so beautiful. I am not going to put the kiss of death on this excellent write by saying how i think it will do in the contest. A 7 and Fave. Hugs....Mike. XX

Jan Allison
Date: 4/5/2016 2:02:00 AM

Thanks as ever for your support Mike - I enter contests to expand my creativity - the most important thing to me is my poems get read - a win is a great way to give your poem more exposure:-) hugs Jan xx

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/4/2016 9:33:00 AM

Nice haiku Jan.......

Jan Allison
Date: 4/4/2016 9:38:00 AM

Thanks Manmath:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 4/3/2016 9:48:00 PM

Beautiful write Jan...good luck in the contest

Jan Allison
Date: 4/3/2016 11:41:00 PM

Thanks so much Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 4/3/2016 4:32:00 PM

Hi Jan...I don't know much about this form, but whatever it is you offer some delightful images. gl in the contest. hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 4/3/2016 4:40:00 PM

Many thanks Paul - it is my first attempt at this form - it's a 5 7 5 haiku with an additional 1 syllable word splitting it up:-) I do appreciate your support:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/3/2016 2:45:00 PM

- Beautiful, Jan !! - Good luck in the contest ! - hugs // Anne-Lis :) #7

Jan Allison
Date: 4/3/2016 2:46:00 PM

Thanks so much Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/3/2016 12:48:00 PM

You did sunshine splendidly, Jan!!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/3/2016 12:50:00 PM

aww thanks Andrea I hope Vienna likes it:-) hugs jan xx

Barry Stebbings

Date: 4/3/2016 9:54:00 AM

Beautiful, Jan, I can feel the warmth, Barry

Jan Allison
Date: 4/3/2016 10:36:00 AM

Constance La France

Date: 4/3/2016 12:44:00 AM

Jan, oh these are lovely, they all flow together so nicely to read like one poem, excellent and I am loving this 7( and btw it will be -12 in my part of Canada tomorrow, so I am quite jealous) ~

Jan Allison
Date: 4/3/2016 6:56:00 AM

I struggle to write one haiku style poem so I am pleased with the flow I managed to create - we have rain here but hopefully brighter warmer days are ahead:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/2/2016 11:06:00 PM

Lovely imagery that didn't even need any pictures Jan! #7. ; )

Jan Allison
Date: 4/3/2016 6:55:00 AM

Thanks so much Connie - it took a while to write I did the original poem about a week ago and my muse took a holiday - but she came back just in time for me to enter the contest lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 4/2/2016 9:38:00 PM

wonderful write, Jan, I too love icecream :)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/3/2016 6:54:00 AM

Thanks Eve - I love ice cream but now hubby is probably diabetic it will be a rare treat in our household:-( hugs Jan xx