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Sept.6. 2024
Soupsters Unite and Write Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Benjamin Bartley

 

 

Poetrysoup, to me is just like a joint family. How by a common bond, here we are strung together! Though sailing in different currents and anchored in remote ports, Distance among us has never been a hitch or a tether. Here we enjoy a warm and genial camaraderie. Often I feel my credit far exceeds my debit, And am weighed down by a heavy sense of debt. I wonder if I will ever be able to repay a small bit. Before I am stamped an insolvent the rest of my life, Let me strive to do some little good while I can. Like a melting candle, let me bring some glow, Before I grow weary and time runs out of my span. Sometimes I feel I am an insidious bed bug, Growing bigger and fatter on others' blood. Here when I registered as an artless novice, I was as inane and inexperienced as a kid. As a kite with a piece of broken string, I floated up hither and thither in the skies in vain. You gave me direction, guidance and support. I owe to each one of you for all that I could attain. Your relentless encouragement helps me aim for heights, Your heartfelt blessings give me loads of happiness. Your poems open before me new avenues of thought. Your gracious company creates for me a new ambience. Before my eyes, a hundred smiling faces appear in a row. Some stand out as beacons of radiant light. With words of encouragement, they vanquish all my doubts, Revitalizing my lackluster spirit and leaving it shimmering bright. Through this forum, we share our inmost thoughts, How close we feel though never been together. Many have left the scene leaving trails of footprints, And many join fresh to continue the endeavor. Irrespective of creed, we are here at art’s sacred shrine. ‘Soupers’ we are called and we breathe the scented pride. We stand tall among many others of our species. Let us proclaim aloud our fraternity worldwide!

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Date: 10/14/2024 6:57:00 AM
Hi Valsa how I truly love this poem which is extended to all on poetry soup and how I totally agree with you that we are one huge poetic family who bare their souls indicating thus how close we are though we have never met. I feel we have all communicated telepathically HUGS BLESSINGS, Jennifer.
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Date: 9/18/2024 7:21:00 AM
What nice encouraging lines penned to encourage and thank other soupers. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K
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Date: 9/14/2024 12:01:00 PM
How beautiful Valsa! Your loving soul comes forth in every word. Your imagined debt is in the black though for you pay it forward with all your poetic contributions and sweet words of encouragement. Faving this! Xo
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Date: 9/9/2024 1:26:00 PM
Very good and also exellent Valsa.' I am glad To koow you.' May God guide and protect.!!
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Date: 9/8/2024 7:16:00 AM
Dear sweet valsa, what a sincere and warm write this is, as always i can feel that these words of gratitude come from a deep place and how much you mean them i can feel through your well woven lines. It is poets like you that deserve to be celebrated everyday, as you lift so many up through your kindness and thoughtfulness. You dont just comment but you actually feel our words and what more can we ask for. I love the metaphors similes and imagery and also “ As a kite with a piece of broken string” that stanza truly resonates strongly with me! May you forever flaunt your poetic skills with us all! And this will be a fave for me! Best wishes in the contest. Sending you light always
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Date: 9/7/2024 10:43:00 AM
This is a "Souper" thoughtful entry. I bet it places! Well done.
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Date: 9/6/2024 9:33:00 PM
It is a truthfully beautiful poem you wrote. Thank you for such generosity in your selfless words. Your thoughts have me entranced.
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Date: 9/6/2024 1:43:00 PM
"Let us proclaim aloud our fraternity worldwide!" Amen! Ditto all you have said for me. Soup has blessed many with their fabulous dedication to promoting art and poetry. Thank you. Could not be said better.
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Date: 9/6/2024 10:53:00 AM
I like this poem. I often feel the same way. When I ran out ofn things to do, I find this site giving me options to do something I like. Thanks for posting. My FAVE.
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Date: 9/6/2024 8:23:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful Souper write. Yes, one big family. Great last line. "Good Luck" Looks like we both did this one. Have a wonderful/blessed day..............
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Date: 9/6/2024 4:54:00 AM
Dearest Valsa, My how you so beautifully captured the essence of community and connection through PS. As I read this , I thought your words eloquently express how a shared passion can unite people across distances creating a sense of family and belonging. I totally agree with you that the transformative power of encouragement, support, and creative exchange nurtures artistic growth and personal development. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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