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As if dropped down from crystal sky, two mares through water run so free. They gleam the dream of Gemini - white beauty in the sun and sea. Written March 10, 2015 by Andrea Dietrich for the MEMENTO OF WATERS Poetry Contest of nette onclaud Based on Visual #3

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Eve Roper

Date: 3/27/2015 2:31:00 PM

Very beautiful descriptive write, Andrea, congratulations on your win a 7

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/27/2015 1:49:00 PM

Congrats!! Sara

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/27/2015 10:41:00 AM

A breathtaking image of the Gemini, prancing through water and carefree is beautifully captured. Congratulations, Andie! Hugs! Kim :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/27/2015 9:39:00 AM

'they gleam the dream of Gemini"........I love that line !! (Maybe because I am a Gemini !!!!) Twins, beautiful in the water,.... they are indeed !!!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/27/2015 12:05:00 AM

Back with my congrats, Andrea! Hugs, Rhonda

Joseph May

Date: 3/26/2015 9:50:00 PM

Congrats on a fine win Andrea

Edward Ebbs

Date: 3/26/2015 8:50:00 PM

Congrats on your win Andrea :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/26/2015 6:49:00 PM

This is great, Andrea! Congratulations on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 3/26/2015 5:45:00 PM

lovely visuals Andrea congrats on win hugs

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/26/2015 4:42:00 PM

the tonality of this work is so impeccable, andie--" they gleam the dream"... amzing!.. enjoyed your mark on in my contest... big congrats and huggs

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 3/26/2015 4:39:00 PM

congratulations on this win Andrea, nicely done.

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/26/2015 3:43:00 PM

This is a very beautiful interpretation of the visual, Andrea. Wonderful! Congrats!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/26/2015 3:40:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) Hugs jan xx

Funom Makama

Date: 3/26/2015 12:29:00 PM

This is a well thought piece, showcasing the tender make up of your soul and the immense creativity, so rich in your mind. I so love this and thanks a lot for sharing..

Monterey Sirak

Date: 3/21/2015 8:20:00 AM

I like the picture but it barely touches on the beauty of your words.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 3/15/2015 4:34:00 PM

stunning imagery Andrea gl in contest hugs

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/15/2015 2:09:00 PM

A beautiful image is transformed to a beautiful poem, lovely done. Good luck in the contest. 7...Loved always,bl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/15/2015 1:12:00 PM

A vibrant image, Andrea! I felt I was there with you watching the mares running through water. Had the pleasure of riding on the beach in the Bahamas and it was a joy I'll never forget. Thanks for bringing back this memory and bet wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn