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Silly Lines For Mr Green In Helter Skelter Rhyme

GREEN eyes with flecks of honey Bright smiles that make days sunny Warm hugs from you, my bunny Kisses that are so yummy!!! Others are GREEN with envy Cause you are oh, so trendy You drive me in your Bentley Your touch brings me to frenzy You are the best apple GREEN One bite and I am a queen Your love explodes on the scene Oh, GREEN boy, where have you been? G racious and gorgeous are you R acy and rambunctious too E dible down to the core E xciting, you give me more N aughty but nice, MR GREEN, THE BEST GREEN, I've ever seen!!!!!!!!!!!! March 23, 2014 PD's Contest Anything GREEN

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/9/2014 8:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win Eileen. I am a bit late, but that is the way it goes when g.daughter is a priority. Smile.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/1/2014 5:44:00 PM

Nicely done. Love, Joyce

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 4/1/2014 2:23:00 AM

Hi clever and deserving of congratulations love xx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/1/2014 2:25:00 AM

Mandy!! Thanks for the visit and sweet words. hugs

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/1/2014 1:54:00 AM

Wonderful take on the green theme, congrats on the fine win, eileen

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/1/2014 2:26:00 AM

Thank you, Dr Ram. I appreciate you visit.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/31/2014 9:35:00 PM

HELLO FOREVER SWEET EILEEN, CONGRATULATIONS.....LINDA

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/1/2014 2:48:00 AM

PD!!! Thank you, my dear. I always do well with you, and am forever grateful! Hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/24/2014 9:16:00 AM

Ha ha, this is great, you filled the screen with green!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/1/2014 2:49:00 AM

I did, didn't I? Thanks ever so much, Richard.

Donna Jones

Date: 3/23/2014 10:55:00 PM

Ahhh...I liked it...made me smile..just before closing my eyes for sleep..night sweetie.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/1/2014 2:49:00 AM

Thanks for visiting my silly green poem, MD. You are a dear!!! Hugs

Tim Smith

Date: 3/23/2014 6:57:00 PM

I love what you did here Eileen. The green "Granny Smith" apple is my favorite....Tim

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/1/2014 2:51:00 AM

OH...yup. Granny Smith is yummy yummy! Thanks for the visit, Tim. Sorry I'm so late with my reply.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/23/2014 6:56:00 PM

It may be silly but it's a really cute way to do the green contest. Just who IS this delectable Mr. Green? I remember a Mr. Green Jeans in Captain Kangeroo. That went off the air when I was just out of high school!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/1/2014 2:53:00 AM

Oh Andrea....now you wouldn't want me to tell, would you? Where, then, is the mystery? Teasing you, sweetie...Hugs

Honestly J.T.

Date: 3/23/2014 5:20:00 PM

Well done. I like the versatility in your lines -JT

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/1/2014 2:54:00 AM

JT...heard your voice on Drake's show. Loved the way you read the poem, my dear. Beautiful. Thanks for visiting this silly poem of mine. Hugs

Paul Callus

Date: 3/23/2014 3:40:00 PM

Hi Eileen! Another eye-catching avatar:) This witty poem shows a good sense of humour..another side to you. Simple, easy flowing, adequate rhyme...a mixture of 2 forms. I enjoyed it! bet it was fun to write :) // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/23/2014 3:45:00 PM

Thanks, Paul. ;-) Humour isn't my strong point, but now and again....I like to dabble in it. Glad you enjoyed this write. Thanks for the visit.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/23/2014 2:51:00 PM

how creative of you to turn this page into the best of green, eileen... engaging!.. is that a new avatar?.. gorgeous!.. huggs

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/23/2014 2:57:00 PM

Thanks, darling Nette!!! As for the avatar....took the pic on Friday...so very recent, Yes. Thanks for your kind words....

Jan Allison

Date: 3/23/2014 1:58:00 PM

very clever write Eileen - love the acrostic bit at the end. good luck in the competition . Jan xxx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/23/2014 2:58:00 PM

Thanks, Jan....Glad you liked this write...Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/23/2014 1:41:00 PM

- THE BEST Mr. GREEN,'ve ever read about!!!!!! - Well done, imaginative - All the best to you in the contest Eileen. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/23/2014 1:44:00 PM

No doubt!! :)))))

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/23/2014 1:42:00 PM

You think, Mr Green would approve? HA HA! Thanks for the visit, Sunshine! When it comes to contests...I could do with some luck! ;) HUGS

Ken Carroll

Date: 3/23/2014 12:11:00 PM

Extremely creative write Eileen..Thank you for your lovely visits to my page..

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/23/2014 12:17:00 PM

The pleasure was ALL mine, Ken. You are a favorite poet. I love your creative and romantic writes....Kisses like opium...quite a line...