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Santa’s Pride Santa Claus went out for a walk one day And caught his misses rolling in the hay His heart exploded They'd been devoted Then he saw her leading Rudolph away. Mrs Claus waved with a smile a mile wide The poor woman had got nothing to hide Rudolph had been sick His nose had an itch Santa had to disguise wound to his pride. 1st December 2022

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Constance La France

Date: 12/21/2022 12:46:00 PM

Belle, fun limerick, poor Santa, blessings

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/21/2022 6:35:00 PM

Thank you Constance and blessings to you too… Belle

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/20/2022 3:36:00 AM

Very cute poem my friend Belle, Santa, must have felt bad about his initial thoughts, they have been so devoted for eons, i can imagine him blushing when he saw the truth. A wonderful Christmas to you and your lovely famil, may it be a happy blessed day, and the New Year may all your dreams come to fruition. We are waiting in anticipation our grand daughter is due any day now, so excited. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/21/2022 6:34:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer. How wonderful that your granddaughter will soon appear. Lots of love and joy there will be for you and your family, a magical Christmas it’s sure to be… Many blessings, many hugs… Belle

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/14/2022 7:05:00 PM

How about a first-aid kit for Rudolph this year, Santa?! lol.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/21/2022 6:28:00 PM

Good idea Gershon. Belle -:)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 12/6/2022 8:49:00 AM

LOL Belle. Funny and delightful! hugs Linda

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/21/2022 6:26:00 PM

Thank you Linda. Hugs in return… Belle

Charles Messina

Date: 12/2/2022 3:32:00 AM

Fun limerick, Belle. Thanks for the chuckle...hugs Charlie

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/2/2022 5:42:00 PM

Pleased you had a chuckle Charlie, hugs in return Belle

Robert Gorelick

Date: 12/1/2022 5:43:00 PM

Santas pride, he must hide, while Rudlph conives! Great limericks, as always, Belle!

I Am Anaya

Date: 12/1/2022 5:20:00 PM

Awe, Belle, still I think you are the funniest of Limericks! Just saw "The Fableman's" something in the air, falling for the best friend, happy Mrs:)

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/2/2022 5:40:00 PM

Thank you Anaya, Limerick’s are my favourites. Belle -:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/1/2022 1:14:00 PM

Fun to read, Belle!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/1/2022 4:49:00 PM

Thank you Andrea… Belle

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/1/2022 1:04:00 PM

Very creative one, Belle. I Hope Rudolph will recover soon. Feel better dear friend. (SMail)

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/1/2022 4:48:00 PM

Santa will be ok I’m sure. Do feel a bit better, thanks for SoupMail, Belle

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/1/2022 8:37:00 AM

Never had Santa down as the jealous type lol. Hope you're feeling better now Belle. Tom

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/1/2022 4:47:00 PM

He knows now there’s nothing to be jealous of. Feeling a little better today thank you Tom… Belle

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/1/2022 7:05:00 AM

Creative one for sure. Poor Rudolph. That was a lot of nose to itch. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/1/2022 4:44:00 PM

It was poor thing, thank you very much Sara… Belle

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/1/2022 6:21:00 AM

- Hope Rudolph recovers quickly... best wishes in the contest, Belle :) -

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/1/2022 4:38:00 PM

I’m sure Santa is quite resilient and will recover well. Not entering the contest as I don’t feel this is good enough. Thank you Anne-Lise… Belle-:)