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Saguaro

There once was a shutterbug named Louie Whose dry humor was a trifle screwy. To a saguaro he said Hands up lest I shoot you dead. A shot; a flash; kablooey went Louie. Date: 07/01/2019 Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Date: 7/10/2019 10:36:00 AM
So clever, it almost went right over my head. I was so busy counting meter. :) Congrats David and I'm loving reading all these wonderfully different limericks.
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Date: 7/9/2019 5:34:00 PM
you have a good funny bone, david... congrats on your win!..huggs
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Date: 7/7/2019 6:24:00 PM
Good one, David. CONGRATS! Janice
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Date: 7/7/2019 5:31:00 PM
oh I love that last part: kablooey went Louie. Congrats on your win
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Date: 7/4/2019 3:21:00 PM
Very colorful, David. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/4/2019 11:40:00 AM
what a fun poem David, congrats on your win:-)hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/4/2019 10:49:00 AM
Giggles! ...oops! ;D Congrats on your win! xomo
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Date: 7/4/2019 9:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win David. With this humorous Limerick. ~Charlie
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Date: 7/4/2019 9:03:00 AM
Ooh! Love the action in this one! Congratulations, David!
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Date: 7/4/2019 8:56:00 AM
David, congratulations with your win in the contest, loved the last line!
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Date: 7/3/2019 4:07:00 AM
Yes. This was fun. :) Ann
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