Red Sun Rising

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Mr. Sun awaken by Dawn was all fired-red with a big yawn Miss Moon waning away from her pink fullness wants to stay they fought stretched, and yawned until Mr. Sun won Thus, Easter morn has finally begun if you happen to be wondering What the moral of this poem is nature follows patterns from the beginning of time until Jesus (God) sets change into action

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Howard Kerr

Date: 4/26/2025 11:52:00 AM

I’m flattered by your review of Not Quite So. Many thanks for that. As for this magnificent piece it represents poetry as it should be. Colourful, creative and image rich Howard

Howard Kerr

Date: 4/26/2025 11:48:00 AM

I’m flattered by your review of Not Quite So. Many thanks for that. As for this magnificent piece it represents poetry as it should be. Colourful, creative and image rich Howard

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/25/2025 1:45:00 AM

I hope you had a wonderful Easter dear friend Sara, your poem is beautiful and so perfect and apt for Easter day - very creative with awesome imagery. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/21/2025 3:42:00 PM

The wonderful thing about God's creation earth. How things follow their natural order

Ink Empress

Date: 4/21/2025 9:39:00 AM

How beautiful is the picture and also your poem, as youv written on that fits the mood of easter so well here! I hope you had a lovely one with your family! Sending you light always dear sara