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Raptors At Night

hunting and circling for prey the moonlight reflects ~ wispy winged moving shadows loud screeches echo winds howl as tree leaves rustle ~ rough water dances in tune an eagle soars in circles dive bombs into rough water ~ proud prey prize displayed 12/14/22 Contest: Triple New CharlieKu Poetry Contest Sponsor: Charlies Messina (757 577 775, Syllables checked with howmanysyllables)

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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/5/2023 10:20:00 AM
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Back with my congrats to you, Tania. I enjoyed the imagery seeing this again.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/5/2023 3:51:00 PM
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Andrea, thank you!
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Date: 1/5/2023 7:11:00 AM
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So well done, Tania. Simply beautiful. Your win is well-deserved. Congratulations
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/5/2023 3:50:00 PM
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Lasaad, thank you!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/4/2023 9:53:00 PM
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"wispy winged", "water dances", "proud prey prize" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/5/2023 4:11:00 AM
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Chris, thank you!
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Charles Messina
Date: 1/4/2023 8:33:00 PM
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Love this, Tania. Awesome imagery! Congratulations on your win! One of my fav's :) Happy New Year! Charlie
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/5/2023 4:11:00 AM
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Charlie, thank you and thank you for my placement!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/24/2022 11:11:00 AM
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A wonderful story/write. Have a blessed day writing away................
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 12/24/2022 3:31:00 PM
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Paula, thank you!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/21/2022 4:05:00 AM
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Enjoyed!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 12/21/2022 1:49:00 PM
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Kim, thank you!
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FJ Thomas
Date: 12/18/2022 5:33:00 PM
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A visual powerhouse Tania! Awesomeness!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 12/18/2022 6:26:00 PM
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FJ, thank you!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/16/2022 2:06:00 PM
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Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. It is very descriptive and I would like to meet that eagle. Thanks for sharing this one.Sara
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 12/16/2022 2:51:00 PM
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Sara, thank you!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/16/2022 3:46:00 AM
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- Beautifully written, Tania :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 12/16/2022 2:51:00 PM
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Anne-Lise, thank you!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/15/2022 12:27:00 PM
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the raptors are enrapturing!! Great theme and execution of it, Tania
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 12/15/2022 4:34:00 PM
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Andrea, thank you!
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 12/14/2022 7:32:00 AM
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Strangely, I was thinking of an eagle when I saw your lovely poem.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 12/14/2022 8:57:00 AM
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Victor, thank you!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 12/14/2022 6:21:00 AM
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Love the imagery in your verse Tania, catching their prey while they are off guard. Good luck Tom
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 12/14/2022 6:52:00 AM
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Tom, thank you!

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