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fragrant rambling rose entwined in honeysuckle memories of gran i cut some blossoms to place on her grey gravestone tears fall like raindrops ''R'' Contest, New or Old Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France 10/06/21

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/26/2021 10:08:00 AM

This so touches my heart Jan. My grandmother taught me about gardens. We shared that love of nurturing growing things. Sadly, I live far from her grave and cannot put flowers on it. Congratulations on this winning poem. Thanks for bringing back so many wonderful days in the garden with her.

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/20/2021 8:31:00 PM

Ah, such a wistful beauty, Jan. Your imagery is rich, tender and deeply moving. Congratulations for your excellent win in Constance's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/11/2021 10:30:00 AM

Congrats on well deserved win Jan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2021 10:16:00 AM

very touching set of haiku. Congrats on the win, Jan.

Mark Koplin

Date: 10/8/2021 7:56:00 AM

very moving Jan! Good job!

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 10/7/2021 11:55:00 PM

Oh... So emotional and touching dear Jan... fantastic write... Congrats on your win my friend.... Hugs... ~ Ani

Marilene Evans

Date: 10/7/2021 5:36:00 PM

Congratulations, how tender and touching. Hugs, Marilene

Eve Roper

Date: 10/7/2021 3:15:00 PM

Beautiful write, Gan, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/7/2021 2:27:00 PM

In just a few words your poem evokes touching memories. Powerful emotions--memories of gran--tears fall like raindrops. BIG congrats on your win, Jan.

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/7/2021 2:26:00 PM

Congratulations on your very well deserved win Jan. you penned a fantastic poem. Warm hugs

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/7/2021 12:58:00 PM

Hi Jan, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write. It was deserved. Have a great day-Alexis

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/7/2021 10:13:00 AM

Scented just right!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/7/2021 12:26:00 PM

thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/7/2021 9:32:00 AM

Lovely write. Congrats and God bless you. Love, Gina

Jan Allison
Date: 10/7/2021 12:26:00 PM

thanks Regina:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 10/7/2021 8:01:00 AM

Jan, congratulations on your win in my "R" contest with this emotional poem, so well done, wonderful pic ~ love and serenity _Constance

Jan Allison
Date: 10/7/2021 12:26:00 PM

thanks for the inspiration Constance:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/7/2021 6:50:00 AM

Beautiful poem Jan. Thank you for your comment on my recent poem. I went to edit my reply and deleted it mistake. I hope all is well. Take care :)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/7/2021 12:26:00 PM

thanks Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 10/7/2021 4:47:00 AM

Beautiful write Jan, best of luck in the contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/7/2021 12:24:00 PM

thanks Scott, great to see you back:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/6/2021 10:47:00 PM

This will go to the top of the list. Best for a win.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/7/2021 12:23:00 PM

second place but i will settle for that:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 10/7/2021 4:16:00 AM

aww thanks Victor I hope Constance likes it:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/6/2021 8:27:00 PM

This is beautiful Jan, not ramblings at all, that's Trumpeters and antivaxxers who do that. LOL

Jan Allison
Date: 10/7/2021 4:16:00 AM

aww thanks Art, i can write the odd serious poem from time to time:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green

Date: 10/6/2021 1:39:00 PM

Beautifully done Jan. This was a heart touching piece that felt good to read.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/6/2021 8:27:00 PM

This is beautiful Jan, not ramblings at all, that's Trumpeters and antivaxxers who do that. LOL

Jan Allison
Date: 10/6/2021 4:11:00 PM

Thanks Chris:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/6/2021 12:25:00 PM

Very touching, Jan! Glad to hear that your mum is Covid-free and you can visit again! Tell her that she has some well-wishers across the pond cheering her on!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/6/2021 12:42:00 PM

aww thanks Ilene and my chest infection has all but cleared I tend to cough at night, am hoping to see her tomorrow xx:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/6/2021 12:22:00 PM

WoW! Jan, This is a good, poignant enrty for the contest. I miss both my grandmothers; they both have been gone ever since I was a child. This well-written write should do well in the contest-Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 10/6/2021 12:41:00 PM

I never met mine , feel i missed out so much as a child:-( hugs Jan xx

Mike Gentile

Date: 10/6/2021 11:51:00 AM

Poignant memories Jan, I miss my Gran too Beautiful!!, Hope you are feeling well xxoo

Jan Allison
Date: 10/6/2021 11:54:00 AM

I never had a grandma only a step step one who we rarely saw. I am almost better and mum is covid free and her care home has re opened so I can start to visit her once again:-):-) hugs jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 10/6/2021 11:37:00 AM

Enjoyed your poem, but that wall looks ready to collapse on the next person to go through the gate . . . .

Jan Allison
Date: 10/6/2021 11:53:00 AM

It does look rather precarious!:-) hugs jan xx

L Milton Hankins

Date: 10/6/2021 11:33:00 AM

Beautiful, Jan. Well-done!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/6/2021 11:35:00 AM

Thanks Milton, pure fiction for the contest but was fun to do a more serious poem:-) hugs Jan xx