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Pen Your Voice

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Example for my "Jueju-Qijue with a twist" poetry contest

Voices from a poets pen Soft ones, loud ones...now and then Speak your tongue, let it be told Let us hear your heart unfold Pen on paper how you feel Then show us all...poet's zeal Told in tone...to tell apart Unfold your voice, in your heart

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Jennifer Fenn

Date: 3/24/2021 11:39:00 AM

Great flow, energy, and pop in a few short lines! Congrats on LIFETIME MEMBERSHIP!

Frances Byrne

Date: 3/24/2021 7:48:00 AM

Hi Charles, What a lovely poem, I really enjoyed it. Look after yourself. Frances

Ann Foster

Date: 7/26/2019 9:56:00 AM

Oh... I need to memorize this one. Lovely, just lovely. Ann

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 4/4/2019 7:02:00 PM

I love this, Charlie. A FAVE for me!

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 4/3/2019 4:12:00 PM

Looks fun Charles, I like the fun go-go do write attitude in this poem.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/30/2019 3:21:00 PM

Interesting form. Sara

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/18/2019 10:17:00 PM

Hello Charles~ Love unfold your heat...exactly. Perfect poem Love, Panagiota

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/15/2019 2:29:00 PM

Hello Charlie, You know what I am making this my favourite. Have a nice day my friend.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/14/2019 10:52:00 AM

Two-word comment here: A FAVE! :) gw

Paul Callus

Date: 3/10/2019 4:07:00 AM

Indeed, the poet's voice is his pen, Charlie! Love this form; I'm tempted to give it a go. Regards // paul

Joseph May

Date: 3/9/2019 6:04:00 PM

Very nicely penned Charles and a great example for your contest..

Anisha Dutta

Date: 3/9/2019 9:44:00 AM

I think, last line showing 8 syllables. i am confused.

Charles Messina
Date: 3/9/2019 10:09:00 AM

OMG, Anisha...you were right. I'm surprised no one else picked up on that. Good catch. I revised it. Thank you for pointing that out.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/9/2019 9:34:00 AM

This is brilliant, Charlie:)

Beata Agustin

Date: 3/8/2019 8:11:00 AM

Thanks for the example; and for sponsoring contests that expose us to different forms. God bless you.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/8/2019 7:22:00 AM

Poet's zeal. Exactly! Bravo!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2019 6:46:00 PM

very nice, Charles. You make me really want to try one of these!

Arturo Michael

Date: 3/7/2019 5:44:00 PM

The soil of poetry calling the rain...Enjoyed

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/7/2019 9:19:00 AM

Lovely poem. I love the form.

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/7/2019 8:25:00 AM

Great one. Poetry allows our voice to speak for our heart :)

Constance La France

Date: 3/7/2019 7:52:00 AM

Charlie, very nice, I love the concept of your poem very much.

Charles Messina
Date: 3/7/2019 8:09:00 AM

Thank you so much, Constance. Glad you enjoyed this :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/7/2019 7:46:00 AM

Hello Charles, Well done! Your last line should be one of the Ten Commandments! People hide true feelings too much. I thirst for reality. Thank you, Panagiota

Charles Messina
Date: 3/7/2019 8:12:00 AM

Hello Panagiota, You are so right. Why is that? Drink up my very dear friend, I salute with you :) Thank you always...Charlie