Peanut Butter and Jelly On Toast

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Dressed in fine attire Armani sleek for sure But his fingers must be flexible wire As they get peanut butter pure How gross for those that follow And want peanut butter And jelly but can't swallow

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 4/15/2016 12:53:00 PM

Hi Sara, i did Love the humour in this write. I know not the form but i do Love the imagery placed in my mind by your words. An excellent write Sara, chuckalicious as they say. For its imagery and its humour, from me, it is deserving of a seven. Hugs....Mike. XX

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/15/2016 4:34:00 PM

Glad that you liked it and gave it a seven..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/5/2016 12:41:00 AM

Lol. Very funny, Sarah! I know I've done this many times with my pom, when he was still alive. You used intelligent expressions too ... "Armani sleek", "flexible wire" ...

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/5/2016 8:31:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by..Glad that you saw the humor in this one..Your comments are uplifting..Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 4/3/2016 11:53:00 AM

MMM I love peanut butter - hubby hates it so more for me - love the cute images Sara:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/5/2016 8:29:00 AM

Great that you can have your own jar then you can eat it however you want and not worry about others..Thanks for dropping by..Sara