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Nightly Tango

Daylight fades out Little insects, they shout It's time for nightly tango Stars come out to play Moon holds centre sway Daylight fades out Velvet sky gleams Dreams dance down on moonbeams Little insects, they shout Darkness slow creeps The whole world sleeps It's time for nightly tango

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Date: 7/11/2024 9:21:00 AM
oh my gosh, I just went back and saw you said almost the exact same thing on my limerick as I said on this poem of yours. So funny!
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Date: 7/11/2024 9:20:00 AM
I really like this one. So clever.
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Date: 6/27/2024 3:31:00 PM
i am impressed by your remarkable pen, Joanna...very creative!
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Date: 6/25/2024 2:40:00 PM
Hi Joanne, long time, no see! Hope you are doing well. Needless to say, I really like this work and all the imagery that brought light into my soul. Pangie
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Date: 6/24/2024 2:28:00 AM
Enjoyed this poem and its final line. Great ideas shown.
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Date: 6/22/2024 5:43:00 AM
I enjoyed this "nightly tango" Lovely write, was it entered in the contest?
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Date: 6/21/2024 9:19:00 AM
what a charming poem Jo i love the impact of the repeated lines:-) hugs jan xx
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