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My Love Awaits

That is the path I've chosen, covered with soft blades of grass hedged with variegated hostas, and moonlight filtering through hanging willow trees. The winding path tilts slightly uphill, towards a wooden pergola that glimmers in the darkness, a temple built in paradise for my lovely Marguerite. I have planned my life's purpose, I know so clearly the urge to live, my priceless gift from Cupid cleansing the humdrum of this life. The nightingale enlivens the silence, full moon oozes limpid serenity, the glow worms twinkle lovingly like a myriad of faraway stars. A lonely breeze caresses my face but cannot quench the thirst nor quell the boiling of my blood nor the hunger I feel for her. I gaze upon her lovely face Chiaroscuro in the moonbeams A painting mightier than any Madonna that emanated from Fra Filippo Lippi Or an intimate impression by Renoir. Yet like these famous portraits of old Our love forever will survive.

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Date: 11/26/2022 2:24:00 PM
How beautiful Victor. The soft sentiment wafts through your words and permeates the feeling of everlasting love as it spills over your poem. Exquisite.
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Date: 11/23/2022 8:08:00 AM
Beautiful and romantic Victor. There is pleasure in reading each line. Linda
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Date: 11/19/2022 6:49:00 PM
That’s so lovely Victor, a beautiful tribute to Marguerite, I love that name, my best friend from school has that name and if I’d been blessed with a daughter she’d have been Marguerite… Belle
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Date: 11/19/2022 1:44:00 PM
Beautiful Victor. True love never dies. God Bless my friend. JB ps. When my father's mother died my grandfather sat and cried for a year asking God to take him too because life wasn't worth living without her. He died one year to the day after she did.
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Date: 11/17/2022 10:45:00 PM
Oh Victor Victor….what a beautiful poem of love and romance about your beautiful wife. King of Romance you are!! Debx
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Date: 11/17/2022 4:55:00 AM
Romantic and introductory work. Introducing famous paintings and painters I enjoyed reading it today. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 11/17/2022 1:01:00 AM
Very romantic and thirsting for your sweet Marguerite in Paradise ! She will be enjoying this, sitting high on her heavenly seat ! Lovely poem dear Victor
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Date: 11/16/2022 7:00:00 PM
Love: Chiaroscuro in the moonbeams. Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 11/16/2022 6:09:00 PM
Your poetry is art in its best form dear friend, thank you for sharing this lovely sentiment.
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Date: 11/16/2022 11:29:00 AM
Enchanting images grace this lovely, romance infused work. It is in my faves.
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Date: 11/16/2022 11:19:00 AM
Fantastic romantic imagery, Victor. A real beauty
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Date: 11/16/2022 8:25:00 AM
Awesome imagery from your gifted pen, Victor. This poem is among your best. Every detail so expertly scripted to bring alive the scenes. A FAVE for me.
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Date: 11/16/2022 8:14:00 AM
Well written verse fully of imagery and feeling. Love the imageries of landscapes. Blessings friend
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Date: 11/16/2022 7:35:00 AM
A beautiful poem with a romantic undertone.
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Date: 11/16/2022 5:09:00 AM
So nicely written, Victor. Your wife is smiling, I'm sure. So am I, my friend.
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Date: 11/16/2022 2:19:00 AM
- A lovely poem spiced with romance, Victor :) - hugs
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Date: 11/16/2022 12:43:00 AM
A very romantic verse with stunning imagery Victor. Tom
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Date: 11/16/2022 12:19:00 AM
Love is from God and love is, indeed, GOD. God bless you Victor. Love, Gina
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