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My Heart Cries

There used to be that “I can’t breathe without you kind of love”. Where I’m your everything happiness And you’re my absolute of everything in life. But it has gone. Gone Gone Gone Now it’s just - Because it needs to be… What happened to us? What went wrong to our deep true love? It feels like it faded into a portal. And land far far away. Out. Of. Reach. So we’re just here stuck. In flesh, untouched. Because that’s us now. But you don’t know how my heart cries- I want so much to love you, like the first time I ever felt my heart was so full of only you. I want so much that your heart is incapable of unloving me. I want so much to rewind back time to our firsts of happily moments and pause it there until it stretches it to our forever future. I want so much for you to say, I love you it hurts to live without you! And I say I love you for life! Then you smile I smile We live happily ever after. The end. Fin Chuuk

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 7/20/2023 1:17:00 AM

Such a wonderful poem Fin. I miss you

Paige Hind

Date: 3/15/2023 10:36:00 AM

Lovely romantic poem!

Fin Chuuk
Date: 3/15/2023 6:47:00 PM

Paige, thank you so much. :)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/14/2023 1:50:00 PM

Dear Fin. Welcome once again to PoetrySoup. I am a free verse girl and always will be. Yes, you do it proud and with perfection. I am impressed. You truly are a skilled writer. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent with us. Have a wonderful night. Take care. (smile) PS - the emotive factor is ever present.

Fin Chuuk
Date: 3/14/2023 8:31:00 PM

Lisa, how my heart smile with this most beautiful comment you gifted me. I am so happy you enjoyed my first post here. Thank you kindly and I look forward to reading more your fabulous poems. :) ~ Fin

William P. Harris

Date: 3/9/2023 11:23:00 AM

Beautiful. Thank you

Fin Chuuk
Date: 3/9/2023 2:45:00 PM

Thank you, Harris :)

Marikate Kingston

Date: 2/22/2023 4:19:00 PM

Your last three lines are my favorite. " Then you smile.... They would make a lovely verse in a Hallmark card. So meaningful, so pretty.

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/22/2023 7:57:00 PM

Awe, thank you so much, Marikate :)

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 2/19/2023 1:14:00 AM

Marvellous poetry Fin, true love never dies, it stays a flame in the heart till our ending arrives. Welcome to PoetrySoup and enjoy your poetic journey… Belle

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/22/2023 7:58:00 PM

Thank you, Belle :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/18/2023 8:16:00 AM

There is nothing as powerful as falling in and out of love. Your feelings on a page makes a great poem every single time. Bravo!

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/22/2023 7:58:00 PM

Thank you, Caren :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/16/2023 6:30:00 PM

May your heart's wish come true, Fin! Welcome to Poetry soup:)

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/22/2023 7:58:00 PM

Thank you, Jo :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/16/2023 12:42:00 AM

There is dee passion in your words, also a sensitivity that touches the soul. Battle cry of love I call it, I enjoyed your poem

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/22/2023 7:59:00 PM

You’re so sweet, Mystic :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/15/2023 5:39:00 PM

finally seeing your first post. wow. to ever have a love like this at all at least you know the feeling. this part was my favorite - I want so much that your heart is incapable of unloving me.

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/22/2023 7:59:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea, very sweet of you :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/15/2023 8:34:00 AM

Highly emotive write, Fin. Love exudes throughout whether then or now. Time changes us ---I like the inspiring thoughts in ending lines.

Joseph May

Date: 2/11/2023 8:31:00 AM

I like the happy ending to this write Fin, Very nicely penned

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/11/2023 4:29:00 PM

Awe, thank you so much, Joseph! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/7/2023 3:52:00 AM

Welcome to soup and thank you for sharing your heart felt work. A love that sticks for life does tend to wane unless a couple goes to a little extra effort to keep it alive. Go the extra mile with a date night doing something she loves. Sara

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/7/2023 8:21:00 PM

Awe, I’m smiling reading your sweet comment, Sara. Thank you so much :). ~ Fin

Edward Ibeh

Date: 2/6/2023 7:41:00 PM

Gorgeous debut poem, Fin:-) Welcome to Poetrysoup, my friend.

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/6/2023 8:52:00 PM

Thank you so much , Edward, for the lovely comment and welcoming. I appreciate it very much. ~ Fin

Susan Ashley

Date: 2/5/2023 9:53:00 AM

Dear Fin, the turmoil of forlorn emotions fill your potent yet tender poem. When love slips through our grasp and feels lost to us we experience the most passionate pain as your poem so eloquently captures. The longing and heartache are palpable. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/5/2023 11:30:00 AM

Hi, Susan, what a pleasure to read to your lovely comment. Thank you so much. Made me smile :)

Charles Messina

Date: 2/2/2023 6:13:00 PM

Nicely written, Fin. You are breaking our hearts with your very first poem (lol). A great descriptive love loss write.. Welcome to the Soup! Also, thank you for commenting on my POTD poem I really appreciate you :) Keep 'em coming, my friend :) Charlie

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/3/2023 4:12:00 PM

I don’t want broken hearts anymore. Lol! Thank you, Charles. :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 2/1/2023 9:14:00 PM

WelcomeFin..i say love for you, is just around the corner I wrote a poem about this same subject a few days ago. Don’t count on one man to stay with you. You choose the next time, you be the one in control. Then..you will not end up being beind victimized Do not think any man is there forever Panagiot. Take Control

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/3/2023 4:10:00 PM

Thank you so much, Panagiota. I appreciate you :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/31/2023 10:30:00 PM

Love loss is always a subject that attracts. You wrote a marvellous poem. I like your format too.

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/3/2023 4:09:00 PM

Thank you kindly, Vic.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/31/2023 11:11:00 AM

- A lovely poem with feelings, Fin - Welcome to our Poetry community... enjoy :) -

Fin Chuuk
Date: 1/31/2023 1:03:00 PM

Thank you for the lovely comment and welcome :)

Mark Frank

Date: 1/31/2023 9:52:00 AM

Well done...the value of your words reveal the power of love. Great Stuff.

Fin Chuuk
Date: 1/31/2023 1:02:00 PM

Thank you, Mark

John Lawless

Date: 1/29/2023 8:18:00 PM

would that we all found such a storybook ending.....or beginning.....nicely done and welcome to "soup"

Fin Chuuk
Date: 1/29/2023 8:27:00 PM

It would make life too easy and beautiful. Lol. Thank you so much, John.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/29/2023 7:53:00 PM

This statement touches my heart deeply: "So we’re just here stuck in flesh, untouched." I can feel your heart and the emotions within. The longing. This almost reads like a song. Welcome to Poetry Soup. My best to you. ~ Brandy

Fin Chuuk
Date: 1/29/2023 8:26:00 PM

Hello, Brandy, your beautiful comment makes me smile. Thank you very much.