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Love In a Lane 2

Day Passed by, Reliving. Parked in a lane, Hid from watchers as we lovingly kissed, Losing count of love as emotions thrilled. Until sunset Meant time up, We left Sad.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/6/2023 12:56:00 PM

Somewhere in the past, lost in the arms, eyes and lips of passion! For sure!

Len Gasun

Date: 6/6/2023 1:50:00 AM

Beautiful and romantic nonet poem you've penned my dear friend. Thanks for sharing. God bless.

I Am Anaya

Date: 6/5/2023 11:09:00 AM

A lover's lane -fooling around like teenagers, then a nervous stomach, that feeling that you get when you're in trouble, maybe a first walk of shame? Viva la romance!

Yann Rolland

Date: 6/4/2023 12:38:00 AM

i love temptations , when they last very long, this is touching and beautifully written have a nicce suday

Jan Allison

Date: 6/3/2023 1:30:00 PM

very romantic indeed Victor:-) hugs Jan your poem is proof of they saying ...parting is such sweet sorrow:-(

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/3/2023 12:09:00 PM

Parting is such sweet sorrow. Love this romantic piece, Victor.

Eve Roper

Date: 6/3/2023 10:44:00 AM

Awe, not enough time... I remember those times with my soul mate. A fav.. Hugs my very dear friend

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/3/2023 6:13:00 AM

In its succinctness, this piece radiates beauty and emotion. Cherished moments convey the essence of ardor and passion.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/3/2023 5:17:00 AM

Moments treasured--now speak of love and romance.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 6/3/2023 3:52:00 AM

Well now Victor. Of course one would leave sad after spending a beautiful moment in time such as you describe. This is beautiful and expressive even in its brevity. Have a great weekend. Peace and Peace once more. Love and Blessings now and always. a (smile)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/3/2023 3:51:00 AM

Very romantic verse Victor, brought back happy memories for me. Enjoy your weekend. Tom

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/3/2023 3:35:00 AM

Ahh!! Romantic lines penned. Special memories were made though which can bring a smile to your face when they come up into the light again. Thank you for sharing this one full of emotion and for dropping by my poem, "The Port full Of Harbor Ships". Sara

Speaks Volumes

Date: 6/3/2023 2:56:00 AM

Time can be cruel, but the less minutes, the more precious every one is. This delighted me.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 6/3/2023 2:19:00 AM

Love keeps no score but heart seeks an encore

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 6/3/2023 1:43:00 AM

Sad but happy I guess, a lovely Nonet Victor… Belle