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Loss and Gain

They wait for the promised golden days wth hope. But in the shadows some trembling with fear. On the same road one going with hope, another going shrunk with anxieties. One to lose most what he has, another to gain more than what he possesses. To some coming of the dawn, some afraid it is the coming of dusk.

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Date: 2/15/2025 1:20:00 AM
A profound flowing canvasing Akham, of the juxtaposed renderings of the realities of life's renderings. Thanks for the enlightening awareness of being thankful and prepared for all. Most of all, thanks for the encouraging inspiration in the dept of this poetic canvasing. One. Peace and Love.
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 2/16/2025 3:39:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 2/5/2025 2:49:00 PM
This poem mirrors what some refer to as "unfair" treatment, and it raises food for thought that could lead to never-ending debates! In the long run it would be wise to accept our destiny and do our best to live happily! Regards // paul
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 2/12/2025 1:04:00 AM
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Date: 2/5/2025 1:21:00 PM
what a great contrast you made between these two situations. Great job.
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 2/12/2025 1:04:00 AM
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Date: 2/5/2025 4:32:00 AM
Yes, such is life with its ups and downs! Enjoyed your poem, Akham!
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 2/12/2025 1:03:00 AM
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Date: 2/4/2025 10:06:00 PM
I find this to be an interesting poem. Forgive my saying , but it reminds me of a litter of puppies. The puppies are picked on personality. Some are shy and just right for the novice pet owner. Another may be courageous and will need a firm training. Then there are the ones in the middle, a sort of every man's dog. I like your poems.
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 2/12/2025 1:03:00 AM
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Date: 1/30/2025 12:12:00 PM
Yes so many ways people see things differently Some one way or the other a very valid poem Akham.'
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 2/12/2025 1:03:00 AM
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Date: 1/30/2025 11:38:00 AM
great poem, two different ways to view the world...I think the hope one sounds better.
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 2/12/2025 1:02:00 AM
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Date: 1/30/2025 10:14:00 AM
There is the smooth and the rough. We just have to live on as best as we can.
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Date: 1/29/2025 2:29:00 AM
- Life ... so unfair ... a poem that shows the truth ... great written, Akham - hugs
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 2/12/2025 1:02:00 AM
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Date: 1/28/2025 9:53:00 AM
Hi Aham. Sometimes the worst things happen to the best people and the best things happen to the worst people.. Whatever happened to you accept it. Because God loves you just the way you are. And he knows when you do evil and when you do good. I think you do good.. Pangie
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 2/12/2025 1:02:00 AM
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Date: 1/26/2025 4:45:00 PM
Hello Akham, a poem that is very nicely done. i enjoyed to read. Blessongs my friend. /Darlene/.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/12/2025 9:53:00 AM
Hello Aham, you are swelcome. Enjoy youir day.my friend. /Darlene/
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 2/12/2025 1:01:00 AM
Thank you

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