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January 6, 2024
Placed 2nd: Life Is a Song Poetry Contest by Ink Empress


 

Chorus of ecstatic themes, lyrical refrain of dreams, life is a song, Of valued relationships, earnest friendships, that long to belong, Of courtships, love, and passion; igniting romantic flame of heart, Of memories nostalgic, sensuous mellifluous melodies impart. A passage on rough seas, vying abode upon shores of morrow, Through storms of yesteryears, defying hurricanes of sorrow, Traversing to joy of springs, rising from decay of wintry woes, Aspiring to future of sunny days, exiting past of gloomy shadows. An odyssey ethereal, harmonizing life’s verses, in stanzas of time, A symphony melodious, extolling serenity of journey sublime; In ballroom of glamor, life is an exotic ballet~ an enthralling dance, Grooving doting realms of love, sponsoring concert of romance. Sonorous is resonance of life, serenading bequest of benevolence, Reverberating in goodwill vibes, defying grimace of malevolence, Tranquil in hymns lauding reverence, heartbeats cadent compose, Humming chords of empathy, teachings compassionate chose. Celebrating life; applause and laughter abound, in gleeful sound, When emanating from hearts and minds, tolls of felicity resound, When treasured albums of love and joy~ prompt us to sing-along Proclaiming in rhapsodic beats, rising to crescendo: life is a song.

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Date: 1/31/2024 7:06:00 AM
I really love this one dear Vijay. Such beautiful imagery and perfect vocabulary for this song. Congratulations in order, I see! :)
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Date: 1/25/2024 11:22:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, beautiful poem Vijay! Debx
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Date: 1/23/2024 6:19:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Vijay! I thought it would do well. I sang it to my own tune, and it flowed nicely. Your imagery is always eloquent. Have a pleasant evening, my dear friend. Bill
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Date: 1/17/2024 5:43:00 PM
Vijay, a big CONGRATS on your win with this moving, descriptive response to the prompt. Great series of metaphors! Janice
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Date: 1/15/2024 2:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 1/13/2024 6:30:00 AM
Dear Vijay, as always your rhymes here truly is captivating and so very well articulated with brilliant lines that flow in musical eloquence. I love the depth of this and the way you’ve phrased your thoughts and your diction which fits the theme of the prompt so very creatively: especially the ending truly stood out for me! Especially “life is an exotic ballet~ an enthralling dance, Grooving doting realms of love, sponsoring concert of romance. Brilliant! Love it“Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/11/2024 12:02:00 PM
Vijay, your lyrical song of life resounds with gorgeous imagery! Good Luck! I hope your 2024 is off to a great start!
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Date: 1/11/2024 5:55:00 AM
Wow!!! What a beautiful poem!!! Loved the imagery throughout... Humming chords of empathy, Tranquil in hymns lauding reverence, Proclaiming in rhapsodic beats, rising to crescendo: life is a song. What beautiful lyrics!!! Just loved it and my fav... Advance congratulations and wish you a very Happy New year...
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Date: 1/11/2024 2:45:00 AM
- A wonderful poem about life, Vijay - A world of song would be perfect :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 1/10/2024 4:50:00 PM
powerful words, and beatifully written, melodious sonf can be life, enjoyed this jewel my friend poet
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Date: 1/10/2024 2:17:00 AM
There is power in your poems, A poem that flows so easily, It has such beautiful lyrical moods and is a pleasure to read.
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Date: 1/9/2024 9:43:00 AM
Your celebrant joy jumps off the page, Vijay!
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Date: 1/9/2024 5:46:00 AM
Well written Vijay. I love the last stanza too. Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 1/8/2024 1:24:00 PM
when you write like this, you can almost hear the music of your talented spherical lines, most charming as always, gl
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Date: 1/7/2024 6:39:00 PM
Through music, its sweet, yet tender melody, you've expressed the many moments that curl around life. Days, even the glimpse of a season, tangle around your words poetically; while holding a bit of melancholy. Your thoughts are beautiful and emotional, all at the same time. My best to you, Vijay. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 1/7/2024 2:08:00 PM
A poetic masterpiece, in joyous celebration of life. So lovely and meaningful, and the rhyming is perfection. :)
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Date: 1/7/2024 9:23:00 AM
Meant to say WILL score high. I have been using my phone for comments lately and it is harder for me to fix typos now! Also meant to say you are a wonder.
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Date: 1/7/2024 9:22:00 AM
I bet this one scored high. You are a wonderful, Vijay.
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Date: 1/6/2024 1:33:00 PM
Beautiful poetry as per usual Veej. Funny, I was just humming a Carpenter's song when I came upon this. "Sing, sing a song, make it simple to last a while life long ..."
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Date: 1/6/2024 11:57:00 AM
I love this! Your poem is a lyrical masterpiece that encapsulates the symphony of life with eloquent verses. The vivid imagery of a life song, from valued relationships to the courtships of love, paints a rich collection of experiences. The metaphors of rough seas and storms of yesteryears, transitioning to the joy of springs, beautifully capture the ebb and flow of life's journey..The use of musical metaphors, such as the 'Chorus of ecstatic themes' adds a delightful rhythm to the poem..
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Date: 1/6/2024 9:35:00 AM
Life is indeed a song Vijay, love your take on the contest theme. So well written. Hope your new year is off to a good start. Tom
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Date: 1/6/2024 8:39:00 AM
Wow, this is a profound take for the contest and these lines reverberate in the most meaningfully mellifluous symphonies of life! How beautifully you've etched different notes and melodies to distinct auras that oscillate in moments of time..Love your rhymes and smooth flow of words along with alluring alliteration and deep essence of lines.."A passage on rough seas, vying abode upon shores of morrow","In ballroom of glamor, life is an exotic ballet~ an enthralling dance" Ahh absolutely stunning
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Date: 1/6/2024 8:40:00 AM
"Proclaiming in rhapsodic beats, rising to crescendo: life is a song" Precious lessons you've conveyed here too.. I'm sure Ink is going to like this, best of luck for the contest, sending best wishes and light :)
Date: 1/6/2024 7:56:00 AM
Life is good and it is to be enjoyed, of course, we do know that sometimes do not go very well. However, we can always make it through to the other side. Thank you for sharing this descriptive and expressive work with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 1/6/2024 7:54:00 AM
"Proclaiming in rhapsodic beats, rising to crescendo: life is a song", Well penned Vijay
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Date: 1/6/2024 6:55:00 AM
What an incredibly lovely Life song you have sung Vijay! Amazing imagery as per usual! Debx
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