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Leaves

the colorful leaves wind blown over the small pond those that fall in, float

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Karen Croft

Date: 9/28/2023 5:18:00 PM

I can definitely see picture this pond. Very nice haiku

Bill Baker
Date: 9/29/2023 4:25:00 PM

Thank you, Karen, for the visit and comment. Hugs, Bill

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/27/2023 9:24:00 PM

My week is going well. When time permits do drop by. I appreciate hearing your perspectives.:0)

Bill Baker
Date: 9/28/2023 8:24:00 AM

Will do Rick. This afternoon. Heading out right now. See you soon. Bill

Arlo Parker

Date: 9/27/2023 7:20:00 PM

Some escaped to fly free across acres, leaving their comrades sadly behind. Lovely visualization piece, Bill. :-)

Bill Baker
Date: 9/27/2023 9:00:00 PM

Thanks for the visit and comment, Arlo. I hope to see more of you. Write On! my friend. Bill

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2023 2:01:00 PM

May they ever float. But sadly, the pond will freeze over!

Bill Baker
Date: 9/27/2023 8:58:00 PM

That's true, but for now they are fun to watch. Smiles ~ Blessings, Andre. Bill

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/27/2023 5:59:00 AM

You paint a pretty picture on my mind.

Bill Baker
Date: 9/27/2023 8:57:00 PM

Thank you for the comment and all the visits, Rick. I got Sara to write some poetry, and now I can't keep up with her. :-) That's a good thing. She's a go-getter for sure. I hope your week is going well. Bill

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/27/2023 5:40:00 AM

Yes they do. Awesomeness. God bless you, Love, Gina - Oh, and so glad to know Sara is your wife!!!

Bill Baker
Date: 9/27/2023 8:55:00 PM

Me too! lol Thanks for the visits and comments, Gina. I finally got her to write poetry and she's hooked now. She's written a novel and memoirs and been published in 11 of the Chicken Soup for The Soul Books. She does a lot of writing for magazines and such. Smiles ~ Blessings my friend. Bill

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/27/2023 4:04:00 AM

Temporarily they float until......I enjoyed reading this one, Bill. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Bill Baker
Date: 9/27/2023 8:51:00 PM

Thanks for the visit and comment, Sara. Have a pleasant week, my friend. Bill

Paige Hind

Date: 9/26/2023 1:40:00 PM

This is beautiful. And true!

Bill Baker
Date: 9/26/2023 5:46:00 PM

Thank you for the kind comment, Paige. Have a pleasant week, my friend. Bill

Ink Empress

Date: 9/26/2023 8:37:00 AM

Beautiful haiku! Soul warming and so creative how you’ve painted imagery in few syllables. I love the way you’ve described fall and floating leaves in various shades , windblown over the small pond! So captivating and dreamy! I enjoyed reading this. Sending you light always

Bill Baker
Date: 9/26/2023 8:41:00 AM

Thank you for the comments and the Light, Ink. Enjoy your day, my friend. Bill

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/26/2023 3:58:00 AM

Great imagination in this haiku. I love autumn falling leaves. Blessings.

Bill Baker
Date: 9/26/2023 8:35:00 AM

Thanks, Victor, I like them too. Bill

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/26/2023 2:38:00 AM

I can imagine a beautiful revolving wind of rusty and gold leaves, floating, gliding and finally setting on the surface of the pond.. So beautiful and delicate is your wordplay here, absolutely captivating and enriched with poetic imagery whilst flowing with depth in the line "those that fall in, float" Amazingly done! Always a joy to read your poems :)

Bill Baker
Date: 9/26/2023 8:40:00 AM

Thank you for the lovely comment, Hiya. Have a pleasant day, my friend. Bill