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marvelous moonbeams I stand in luna's spotlight cloudless sky enchants I talk to the trees my moonlight soliloquy just the moon and I 02/07/21

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/15/2021 6:59:00 PM

Beautiful, Jan ~

Jan Allison
Date: 3/16/2021 2:18:00 PM

Im SO proud of this one Line:-) hugs jan xx

Vasco Ludovice

Date: 3/8/2021 6:21:00 PM

What a lovely poem! that moon! :) Big Hug Vasco

Jan Allison
Date: 3/16/2021 2:18:00 PM

Thanks so much Vasco:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/10/2021 11:38:00 AM

- Spellbound in your moonlight ... so beautiful, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/16/2021 2:18:00 PM

thanks sweet Anne-:lise:-) hugs jan xx

Tania Kitchin

Date: 2/10/2021 6:32:00 AM

Gorgeous haiku's Jan, love the moon imagery! hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 3/16/2021 2:17:00 PM

thanks so much Tania:-) hugs jan xx

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/9/2021 8:10:00 AM

Nothing better than walking on a path or road with your husband or partner under a full moon, no need for a torch! We go for long walks in the Kruger Park, but within the restrictions of the camp we are staying at. You can hear the animals so beautifully - it is so peacefully quiet. Blessings, and hugs, Jennifer. A lovely write,

Jan Allison
Date: 2/9/2021 2:15:00 PM

that must be a spectacular sight for you jennifer:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/8/2021 1:37:00 PM

Pretty and reflective. What prompted this one, Jan?

Jan Allison
Date: 2/8/2021 1:41:00 PM

Just walking in the moonlight:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 2/8/2021 12:51:00 PM

this is lovely, jan - especially the second verse. i saw the most perfect crescent moon this morning and it was such a treat!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/8/2021 1:27:00 PM

Thanks Ilene it was fun to write a more serious poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 2/8/2021 11:34:00 AM

What is really amazing is that the moon just hangs around - night after night - yet continues to fascinate generation after generation. Well done, Jan! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison
Date: 2/8/2021 1:27:00 PM

thanks Rico, makes a change from writing poopy poems lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/8/2021 3:42:00 AM

The moon and the trees sound stupendously gorgeous now Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/8/2021 1:25:00 PM

Thanks Caren:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/7/2021 11:18:00 PM

Gorgeous poem in haiku form. Is this for a contest? ~~

Jan Allison
Date: 2/8/2021 1:25:00 PM

Thanks Victor:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/7/2021 8:18:00 PM

Very lovely Jan. You found the perfect picture to enhance your words too, unless this is also an Ekphrasis. If for a contest it should do wonderfully! Blessings xxoo

Jan Allison
Date: 2/8/2021 1:25:00 PM

thanks Connie, I had fun writing this and wanted to show there is more to me than just a humourist:-) hugs jan xx

Mark Koplin

Date: 2/7/2021 6:38:00 PM

That's beautiful Jan! Good job

Jan Allison
Date: 2/8/2021 1:24:00 PM

Thanks Mark just trying to prove to my mockers that I can write poetry:-) hugs Jan xx

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/7/2021 6:16:00 PM

I can't think of a better night companion, then the moon at times, Solitary but stead with light. wonderful entry tonight Jan,

Jan Allison
Date: 2/8/2021 1:24:00 PM

We went out tonight the sky was so clear and the stars twinkling in midnight blue sapphire skies it was truly beautiful:-) hugs Jan x

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/7/2021 3:29:00 PM

Reminds me of the song Clint Eastwood sang in "Paint Your Wagon". A pretty double dose of haiku.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/8/2021 1:22:00 PM

Thanks Robert:-) hugs Jan xx

Terry Flood

Date: 2/7/2021 3:11:00 PM

So that’s you, me and Prince Charles then. Don’t you just love the way those trees listen and never answer back (although I once had one that kept saying ‘Who?’). Spent many nights on river banks (fishing... I’m not a weirdo) with only the moon for company so I felt and recognised the atmosphere in your smashing poem. All the best, Jan. Terry

Jan Allison
Date: 2/7/2021 3:17:00 PM

Thanks Terry, I can imagine how wonderful it is to go fishing by moonlight:-) hugs Jan xx By writing this poem I was just trying to prove to folk there is more to me than a humourist/poop poet :-) hugs jan xx

Jcb Brul

Date: 2/7/2021 3:09:00 PM

What a joy to read! It's like serenity amidst chaos! Lovely!! A fave for me.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/7/2021 3:15:00 PM

Thanks JCB we have little light pollution here and when the street lights go out at 1am (and earlier in some roads we walk on during out midnight walks) the sky is so amazing to observe with the stars being so spectacular, thanks so much for the fave I do appreciate it:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/7/2021 2:49:00 PM

I bet thats a beautiful view over the sea when you go for summer walks. Always a great inspiration for poets, it inspired you well Jan. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 2/7/2021 2:54:00 PM

t was such fun to write Tom, just want to prove there is more to me than a poop poet:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/7/2021 2:18:00 PM

I enjoyed this. Beautiful Jan :)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/7/2021 2:53:00 PM

Thanks Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/7/2021 2:10:00 PM

WoW! Jan, What an enchanting poem. I enjoyed the peaceful and lovely setting. Well done:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 2/7/2021 2:19:00 PM

Thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 2/7/2021 2:05:00 PM

She-Wolf Jan

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 2/8/2021 2:00:00 PM

Not at all "R" Jan I revert you to my comment on your fiction poem. Hugs and blessings

Jan Allison
Date: 2/7/2021 2:17:00 PM

I am certainly on the prowl to prove i dont write poop poetry all the time lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 2/7/2021 1:37:00 PM

this is lovely, jan! is it for a contest? :)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/7/2021 1:42:00 PM

No its not for any contest Charlotte I just wrote it on a whim last night:-) so glad you like it:-) hugs Jan xx