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I'Ve Discovered How 'Polly Ticks' Written With Lin Lane

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Polly Wally waddles all day She's running for office in LA She wastes time doodling Enjoys a daily noodling But she never earns her pay Polly Wally was once quite a looker Before politics she worked as a hooker Now she dresses with power Doesn't get paid by the hour Now she's aging no man would book her! Collaboration with Lin Lane - Lin has chosen a different title for her poem Which she has called Polly Wally Doodles 08-16-17

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Pat Adams

Date: 8/20/2017 9:23:00 AM

Well, I missed this one somehow, so many poems, so little time! LOL You ladies are next to my own heart. Can't go wrong with plays on words!!! Thank you both for writing this! rpat

Jan Allison
Date: 8/20/2017 12:05:00 PM

We are working on part 2 pat lol:-) we both wanted different titles but the both work in the context of the poem:-) hugs jan xx

John Michaels

Date: 8/18/2017 11:11:00 AM

Scathingly close to the knuckle, as usual, Jan (and Lin) - but very funny!! Best of luck in the contest. Regards, John.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2017 11:14:00 AM

It's not for the contest John just a fun write and part 2 will follow one day :-) hugs jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/17/2017 7:01:00 AM

Ha ha, this one is awesome, Lin and Jan:)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/17/2017 7:23:00 AM

Thanks so much Jo we are working on Part 2 and now we have names for the LLamas we are working on more poems for that lol:-) hugs jan xx

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/16/2017 1:26:00 PM

This is hysterical, loved it, Good luck!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/16/2017 3:04:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed it Mike, Lin and I had fun writing it - it's simply for fun not for any contest:-) hugs jan xx

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/16/2017 1:01:00 PM

You got a cracker here :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/16/2017 3:03:00 PM

Cheers Maureen we had fun writing it:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 8/16/2017 12:22:00 PM

The bird's still chirping...good luck in the Collaboration Contest

Jan Allison
Date: 8/16/2017 12:39:00 PM

Lol its not for any contest and I can' t enter my own contest lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/16/2017 8:17:00 AM

This is so awesome, you women have tickled my funny bone and made me laugh! I surely enjoyed reading this comical poem this morning! I will be thinking about this all day, poor Polly! What a poem!! Great Work!!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/16/2017 12:16:00 PM

Thanks Russell:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 8/16/2017 8:10:00 AM

Thanks for all the fun and laughter you bring me, Jan. It's always great to write with you.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/16/2017 12:16:00 PM

It was great fun and can't wait to do it ag:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/16/2017 8:04:00 AM

Excellent! GL in contest!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/16/2017 8:05:00 AM

It's not for the contest Kim just a fun write with Lin:-) hugs jan xx