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Intermingled Poems of Love

A tender smile, a fleeting glance, Eyes that meet to touch the soul, A beating heart, a breathless breath, A deepened sense of something whole. (A tender smile, a fleeting glance), A need to please and give of self, (Missed beats of hearts and minds in trance) To share all things of mind and heart. (One feels a sense of something whole), With openness and sweet surrender (Rest warm and soothing in the soul)… And of the whole become a part. (Outshining aura’s brilliant glow), A touch of closeness and of warmth, (Upsurge of passions soon bestow) The radiance of inner glow. (Strong flowing currents charged with fire) Bathe in light of endless aura, (Now fanned and fed by love’s desire)… A current charged with endless flow. (Emboldened hearts combine to share) To feel another's joy and pain, (Surrender fears…lay each soul bare) Two beating hearts, as one, to care. (Soon bond as one, their love declared)… And of the thoughts that words can't speak, Two open souls, in silence, share. To speak of love through word and song Is at its best, mere child’s play, In contrast to the silent prose That heart and soul, through love, convey. © Sandra M. Haight 2015 All Rights Reserved -------------------------------------------------------------- ~8th Place~ Contest: Intermingle Sponsor: Craig Cornish Judged: 04/16/2015 Poems used: #1 Poem, Posted: 12/01/2014 -- What Is Love #2 Poem, Posted: 10/05/2014 -- Amorousness (in parenthesis and italics) -------------------------------------------------------------- .

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Date: 4/18/2015 6:43:00 PM
Nice win...PD
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Date: 4/17/2015 1:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your always wonderful read a 7. Blessings dear friend Eve
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/18/2015 3:24:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve. I am pleased that you liked it, and appreciate your nice comment and support. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/16/2015 8:02:00 PM
This works so well Sandra...simply beautiful...congrats to you!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/18/2015 3:25:00 PM
Hi David, I appreciate your positive comment and congrats. Thank you so much for stopping by. Sandra
Date: 4/16/2015 4:54:00 PM
These flowed together so beautifully - many congrats on your win in this challenging contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/16/2015 5:07:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan. It is always to nice to count on your with your lovely comments and congratulations. I appreciate it so much, friend! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/27/2015 11:23:00 PM
wow, you found two really good poems to intermingle there. I have a few that make for a really short poem even when intermingled. I don't stand a chance against one like this!!
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Date: 3/1/2015 9:39:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea. Hopefully, you'll put a nice one together with the help of your excellent creative muse! :) Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/27/2015 12:44:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Way to go!! This wasn't so easy for me. You make it seemless.Thanks for stopping by.Sara
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/27/2015 5:17:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sara. Yes, it was difficult to work with! Thank you so much for your nice comment. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/26/2015 10:09:00 PM
I like your use of two contrasting love poems. One of bold passion and one of tenderness. Both fit perfectly together... You did a beautiful job with this challenging contest, Sandra. Good luck to you!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/27/2015 11:42:00 AM
Hi Kelly, so nice of you to read my poem and to offer such encouraging comments and best wishes for the contest. I really appreciate it. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/25/2015 6:17:00 PM
An excellent pen...good luck in the contest.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/27/2015 11:48:00 AM
Thank you, M.L. I appreciate your positive comment and best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/25/2015 12:51:00 PM
effervescent in content and flow.. it seemed just like one work, Sandra.. you are awesome!.. huggs
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/27/2015 11:48:00 AM
Hi Nette, thank you so much for your encouraging comments. I value your opinion so much. Thanks again, Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/24/2015 1:57:00 PM
Beautiful poem, 7 good luck in the contest Blessings
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/24/2015 8:58:00 PM
Hi Eve, thank you so much for stopping by with your nice comment and support! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/24/2015 1:20:00 PM
P.s I forgot the "Seven"! So here it is..."7"!!!!
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Date: 2/24/2015 1:10:00 PM
Absolute poetic genius!!! I would say the best poem that i have ever read on Poetry soup!!! If this poem does not get the accolades that is so richly deserves, then i, for one, will roll my eyes in utter despair!!! Superbly done...end of!!!! :) john.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/24/2015 9:00:00 PM
Oh John, you are too kind! I so much appreciate your compliments and encouraging words. Writing poetry has always been something I love to do, and I began as a child many years ago. Again, thank you so much, I really appreciate your support and the 7 too! Sandra
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John Fleming
Date: 2/24/2015 1:13:00 PM
By the way: In my humble opinion you possess great natural poetic ability!!! :) john.
Date: 2/24/2015 1:08:00 PM
You did a wonderful job here. I read it several times and it gently came alive for me. Your talent come through strong and straight from the heart. Emile. #7
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/24/2015 9:03:00 PM
Hi Emile, I am so pleased that you enjoyed my poem, and I so much appreciate your positive comments and support and the rating. Thank you so much! Sandra

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