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I wasn’t so sure what he said, but it meant a lot to me.
In whispers soft, his words did stray, I strained to catch what they convey, Though muffled, their sweet essence, dear, Filled my heart with joy sincere. Each syllable, a gentle touch, A message that meant oh so much, Though unclear, their power true, In my soul, a love they drew. The language spoken, not with sound, But in heartbeats, love was found, I was not sure what he had said, Yet his love, my heart widespread. So in the silence, we did share, A bond beyond words in the air, For sometimes what means the most, Is felt in whispers, love engrossed. His look, his touch, his voice so soft His gentle words did softly waft It was not what he really said Years since, still lines left unread

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Date: 5/7/2024 4:15:00 AM
beautiful poem, not spoken sometimes is better, thanks for the subtle words Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/17/2024 2:13:00 PM
Why, thank you, Yann. I appreciate the visit. Sara K
Date: 5/6/2024 4:55:00 PM
such a fluid and beautiful poem, Sara K...such power in things not spoken. You addressed the prompt perfectly. You should do well in the contest. Wishing you a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/7/2024 3:50:00 AM
Why, thank you, Sara B. I appreciate the wishes for a pleasant evening. Sara K
Date: 5/6/2024 12:43:00 PM
What beautiful writing, Sara. On the specific line that you selected to use, you actually delivered a spectacular performance.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/6/2024 3:06:00 PM
I am delighted that you placed such high compliments on it,Lasaad. I appreciate your time spent here. Sara K
Date: 5/6/2024 11:50:00 AM
Very lovely writing, Sara you really went to town on the given line you chose to use
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/6/2024 12:12:00 PM
Oh, Andrea, I have not entered it in the contest. I am not sure if I will enter it. Thanks for the compliments. Sara K
Date: 5/6/2024 10:33:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. FAV for me... Have a fun day/week writing away...................
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/6/2024 12:12:00 PM
I am glad you enjoyed reading it, Paula. I am honored you would fav it. Sara K
Date: 5/6/2024 9:29:00 AM
This is going to a fav. You captured love and what it means to perfection. Wow a gem. love phyl
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/6/2024 12:11:00 PM
Why, thank you, Phyllis. I am honored that you would fav it. Sara K

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