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i would not have thought of it

I would not have thought of it myself to make love to drive away the crazy, to be wary of virtuous principals, to think of you more than New York, I would not have thought of it alone, I would not have thought of it myself, to cross California on a horse, To forget about the psychopaths, to kiss you rather than become a writer, I would not have thought of it alone, I would not have thought of it myself, to read Descartes and Montaigne to dream, to be wary of strangers who walk, to trust Alice more than the poets, I would not have thought of it alone, I would not have thought of it myself, to understand the silences that I listen, to make French cuisine to be lucid, to make love to drive away the crazy, I would not have thought of it alone,

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Date: 12/18/2024 6:57:00 PM
No man is an island, as the poem goes. And in the words of an old song, everybody needs somebody sometimes. Love the way you've conveyed that message through this beautiful poem. :)
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Date: 11/20/2024 12:34:00 AM
What a unique fresh voice you have! I like this because it’s thought provoking and intriguing.
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Date: 11/18/2024 9:52:00 PM
Your poetry is so unusual but so cool. Always a pleasure to read
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Yann Rolland
Date: 11/18/2024 10:13:00 PM
thanks andrea, i regret sometimes english is not my first language, thanks for the cool compliment appreciated
Date: 11/18/2024 6:56:00 PM
We accomplish many things with the help of others. We might not have thought of doing things alone. I like your refrain in the poem. Have a great week ahead, dear Yaan.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 11/18/2024 10:14:00 PM
thanks valsa for stopping by and comment nicely, i like refrains in poems for the music Have a nice day
Date: 11/18/2024 3:22:00 PM
Two heads are better then one lol
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Yann Rolland
Date: 11/18/2024 4:00:00 PM
thanks Rose for the proverb, precious to memorize yann
Date: 11/18/2024 11:53:00 AM
- The art of thinking together ... lights up a dark room, Yann :) - A great poem :) - hugs
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Yann Rolland
Date: 11/18/2024 3:58:00 PM
great thought and image, thanks anne lise
Date: 11/18/2024 7:46:00 AM
Great poetry, Yann. One thing is for certain- "I would not have thought of this alone" Love it! Have a wonderful day!
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Yann Rolland
Date: 11/18/2024 3:58:00 PM
thanks charles, for the comprehensive and kind comment
Date: 11/18/2024 4:15:00 AM
Definitely creative lines penned. I enjoyed it. Sometimes it takes another person to think of something then the other person to try it. LOL..Sometimes it takes the other person to just say no. LOL..Sara K
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Yann Rolland
Date: 11/18/2024 3:57:00 PM
so true and important , just say no or yes, and goes the world, thanks sara for stopping kindly
Date: 11/17/2024 10:46:00 AM
We need others so we can grow, hopefully become better, more adventurous, wiser…we don’t do life by ourselves.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 11/18/2024 3:56:00 AM
thanks Kim, enjoyed your comment best wishes yann
Date: 11/17/2024 7:30:00 AM
I love the way you repeated a line throughout your poem. Great thoughts.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 11/18/2024 3:56:00 AM
thank you victor for the nice comment best wishes

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